Anything But Ordinary:Chloe/Oliver (NC-17) Chapter 19

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Comments

[gen717]

Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter now, so hopefully it won't take too long! *hugs*

[svgurl]

OMG! Wow! What an intense chapter. My head is still spinning.

Davis was totally creepy in the beginning. The Chloe/Oliver was so cute. And I totally love the way you write Bart.

“Whoa! This is no time for making out!” A voice sounded from outside the car. Bart had been informed of the change in relationship status for Oliver and Chloe, but he’d yet to see them go at it the way they were right now. He rolled his eyes, they were worse than two horny teen-agers at some make-out point.

LMAO! That was great. Bart's hilarious. :D

The fight was intense. And the ending of this chapter! I hope Ollie, Chloe and Clark are okay!

Wonderful job!

[gen717]

I haven't used the JLA in this story and it felt kind of odd, because usually they are in all of my stories. I absolutely love Bart. I think he's my favorite JL member to write.

I love you icon, btw!

Thanks so much for reading. :)

[lilacs_roses]

Ditto to the above comments.

What's happened to Chloe? ... What did she do to Davis and what's going to happen to/with him now?

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

[gen717]

I hope to have the next chapter up soon. BTW, I FINALLY got a chance to sit and read your story, I left a comment over on K-Site. :)

[gen717]

Awww.. you KNOW I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I'll fix it, no worries. :)

[purple_moon123]

OMG!!!! That was... wow!!!

Bart catching Chloe and Oliver and comparing them to horny teenagers is just hilarious!!!

What is going to happen to Clark and Oliver????

Come back and fix this!!!

[gen717]

Hehe.. I adore Bart.

All will be fixed in due time. :D Thanks so much for reading!