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anonymous September 30 2008, 23:05:25 UTC
that was so awesome, i love the kiss. i know what you mean but i think the assertive chloe is still there. wow ollie is hard to resist!!!!!!!!!!!

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gen717 October 1 2008, 03:43:33 UTC
I hope assertive Chloe is still there, I know she's around! LOL

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gen717 October 1 2008, 03:46:48 UTC
Yay! So glad you liked this.

And Guh. I know. I was swooning writing that Chlollie scene, and picturing it in my head. LOL

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tehzo October 1 2008, 02:57:53 UTC
“You’ve talked to him?”

“Maybe.”

“Lois!”

So funny!

“It won’t work.” She seemed out of breath, as though she’d run up to the penthouse instead of taking the elevator. She was nervous.

Oliver turned around at the sound of her voice, trying to hide his disappointment.

I really loved the Chloe and Oliver part. How she comes running in, out of breath, and Oliver just quietly watches as she goes on and on...and then the kiss...*sighs* so perfect. :)

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gen717 October 1 2008, 03:49:05 UTC
Hehe, so glad you liked how it played out. Chloe didn't stand a chance, and Oliver just let her babble, because no matter what she said, he was going to kiss her anyway. LOL

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enderwiggin24 October 3 2008, 20:56:44 UTC
I love the talk between chloe and lois!
Even though I am still a Lollie shipper (hee, I live in a lot of AU worlds, so one more does not matter), I am totally loveing it, that lois gave her blessing to chloe!

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gen717 October 3 2008, 21:17:20 UTC
I really feel that Lois would give her blessing as long as enough time had passed and both she and Oliver made peace with what they had, knew it was over and moved on emotionally. I think Lois cares about both of them to want their happiness, and I'm sure she'd be mature about it. :)

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laurelnola December 16 2008, 06:22:25 UTC
"“Stubborn, and…” Chloe continued to meet his eyes, the burn of heat in their shadowy depths causing her heart to turn over fluttering wildly in her breast. “You’re not… even…and… I’m too different… I’m not like the others…. you can’t just… think you can do that…” The restless desire in his eyes had her blood racing. Chloe could barely breathe or think a coherent thought. The hand that cupped her cheek, tipped her face up closer to his. Slowly, lazily, never breaking eye contact, he lowered his mouth, his lips slanting, hovering a scant inch above hers. A low moan slipped past her lips, a husky helpless sound of want. “Oh God,” she whispered. Her fingers plunged into his hair, pulling his head closer. “Oliver,” she breathed."

Guh. *faints*

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