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kyumin_fan January 29 2016, 22:52:58 UTC
OH MY GOD. i cna't tell you just how much i love this story!!
i love the whole concept of the sixty-second previews. it's like a different touch on time travel AUs and yes i watched Sunggyu's MV and now i'm even mroe sad

BUT OMG HOW BEAUTIFUL IS THIS FIC (like baekhyun)

Chanyeol wondered to himself what goes through Baekhyun’s mind as his beautiful fingers grace the piano keys, what image does he have in mind, how beautiful could he possibly see the world as it is? Further and further, he gets sucked into this unending obsession towards how life is like in Byun Baekhyun’s eyes. JUST ;___;

Chanyeol liked talking to Baekhyun. He loved hearing Baekhyun’s opinions and stories, and just about anything. He was smart and insightful, and Chanyeol loved the way Baekhyun perceived the world and its beauty. If you asked a normal person to look at the night sky, they’d say the stars are beautiful. But if you asked Baekhyun, he’d point out how those stars are in fact, all dead and that death doesn’t always have to be perceived with such ( ... )

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kyumin_fan January 29 2016, 23:08:35 UTC
Baekhyun responded politely. Chanyeol waited before Luhan was completely out of sight before walking towards Baekhyun and taking a seat beside the bed. He leaned on top of Baekhyun’s thighs, almost hugging them. “What’s wrong?” Baekhyun asked, brushing Chanyeol’s hair between his fingers.

“I’m replenishing my energy.”

Baekhyun chuckled at his juvenile response. “So why are you here?”

“Because you missed me.” NEEDY YEOL ACK MY HEART

Baekhyun was still focused on his book. Chanyeol felt like his arm was about to fall off but he doesn’t want to disturb Baekhyun, especially when he looked so candidly beautiful like this. It’s times like this when Chanyeol thought that his ability was completely and utterly useless, and that he’d rather have something that’d allow him to capture beautiful moments like this with his eyes. So he’s forced to do so in manual by staring at Baekhyun as long as he wanted. i know how you feel u__u
“The real Baekhyun is very clumsy, and mischievous. He hates depressing classics, particularly everything by ( ... )

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kyumin_fan January 29 2016, 23:10:38 UTC
AND OH HAPPY 21ST BIRTHDAY!! THANK YOU FOR ALL OF YOUR WONDERFUL FICS! <3

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supergelie February 8 2016, 01:50:00 UTC
oh my what wonderful comments! thank you omg i'm so emotional rn

thank you for reading!! and for your wishes <3

i, too, can't believe they flirted on school grounds in broad daylight. kk i guess they are both bold

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beautiful! clio323 February 4 2016, 07:12:08 UTC
wow. just w o w

this was stunning and so heart-swelling -- it was grand and beautiful and so so romantic. I loved your characterizations of chanyeol and baekhyun here, and I really enjoyed that little surprise of zitao at the end.

also, you're use of tempos and music as a theme was a perfect choice.

really, I applaud you and thank you so much for this wonderful story. I have a feeling its going to be one that I come back to often!

p.s. happy birthday!!! :D

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RE: beautiful! supergelie February 8 2016, 01:52:58 UTC
thank you!! i, too, loved chanyeol and baekhyun here, i think i got carried away. this story had a rather more depressing ending but when i proofread it over and over, i just can't bear being so cruel towards them (so i went with less cruel kk)

it's been so long for me so i'm really glad you liked it! ^^

thank you for your wishes <3

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