[drabble] Custom Made: SasuNaru

[gelfling8604]

Custom Made
SasuNaru, kinda
Challenge: Civilians
Shopping for friends who hate you has never been more difficult. Possible spoilers, since it is post season 1. For naruto100's weekly challenge.
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Comments

[gelfling8604]

Hee ^^

Good thing, I'm guessing?

[gelfling8604]

Hurrah! This one had me guessing myself--didn't want to end anywhere good. Just go on and on and on...

*sigh*

[reimars]

I had to reread the last line a couple times to understand what he meant, but then I did, and hoo. Awesome.

[gelfling8604]

Hee! Yeah, this one went all over the place and just wouldn't stop; guh. I like the hoo :D

[hehe_05]

I liked it all up to last line, which made me feel like an idiot. I read it a couple times, but still don't get it.

*pulls on hair*

[gelfling8604]

Hee! Eh, sorry about that; it was supposed to be Naruto searching out people who might've got Sasuke his sweet shiny sword/known how he got it, so on so on :D

Meep ^^;;
Is clearer?

[hehe_05]

Ah Ha! I thought it was along those lines, asking the old man to sell out the other buyers and all, but wasn't clear. Now I am clear! XD thx!

(love your story, fun with a touch of dark and dark with a touch of fun)

[anonymous]

I am of the opinion that you are perfectly fine without any control at all.

Love the drabble. And Naruto's double-edged comment, because it's so very very true.

Oh, and I was reading this book the other day and came across a quote I thought you might like. I probably translated it badly, but I hope I could keep some aspect of it intact. It goes:
"...can you keep a secret?"
"If you ask it's because you doubt, and in this case..."
- Dom Casmurro

--Vivi

[gelfling8604]

Squee! Quote! I wiggle with joy! What's the original language?

And...yeah. Having no control is fun once in a while, but for drabbles, it's kind of incovenient 0_o

Though I love that you say that :D

[anonymous]

It's originally in Portuguese.

Inconviniences can be fun. Particularly the artistic ones, and especially when it's somebody else that's being plagued by them. That way you can just sit back and watch the pretty explosions ;D

[gelfling8604]

Hehe ^^

I do enjoy pretty explosions when they happen to someone else. It's the someone else part, that really makes it special :D

[ryokojesse]

OH-!! GAH! characterization out the wazoo!!! love your art. you write mad genius-well. i would defintiely buy a book of your drabbles/oneshots etc. amazing.

[gelfling8604]

Yayyy!!! I always liked this one, b/c it nearly went places, but then I was never sure where those places WERE, so it didn't.

Note to Self: Stop Being Neurotic.