Comments | gelfling8604: [ficlet] FMA: Home Away From: Alfonse Heiderich/Ed

gelfling8604

[ficlet] FMA: Home Away From: Alfonse Heiderich/Ed

Aug 22, 2006 17:37

Home Away From
FMA: Conqueror of Shambala
PG-13
Alfonse Heiderich/Edward Elric
From Noah’s POV, during FMA movie. Whole histories can come from details, if you know how to see them. Unrequited.

( Edward’s a point of mutual interest. )

ficlet, germany, tuesdays, ed, alphonse, fma

Comments 13

marith August 23 2006, 01:46:30 UTC

Oh, ouch. *kicks Edward*

This was really good; I've never much cared for Noah, but you make her a more real and (strangely) sympathetic character by having her analyze the guys, see what she can get from them if she has to to survive.

Thanks for sharing!

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 05:35:45 UTC

Eddie, Eddie...he'd probably kill someone for calling him that, but sometimes that's half the fun. And Noah struck me as...strange. And also because sometimes in the movie it'd seem like German-Al was crushing on her, and on Ed, while Noah was just after Ed. And Ed's just after his Al. So...

...Yeah. None of this has any real basis in reality, but the possible love triangles are fun. Fun! And I preferred Noah over Rose, who I think she was supposed to imitating.

dragon_moon August 23 2006, 01:50:53 UTC

This was lovely - sad, but beautiful.

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 05:37:27 UTC

This was lovely - sad, but beautiful.

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Most of FMA. The anime, at least. And I've got an icon like yours somewhere, though I'm not sure where it is. The best text ever :D

dragon_moon August 23 2006, 20:08:48 UTC

That is true, most of FMA is like that. Hurts so good, eh? :o)

That genius icon makes me crack up. I can never think of anything interesting to say on icons, so if they've got text on them I didn't create them. *G*

momoiro_usagi August 23 2006, 02:15:55 UTC

Wow...that was really, really great. I love Noa's character, and it's nice to see her getting a little attention in a story for once. You wrote her really well, and I'm always interested by stories exploring her view of Ed and Heid's feelings! Great job! <3

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 05:41:37 UTC

She fascinated me; I've got this whole Al/Al/Ed/Noah love triangle theory going on that doesnt' make much sense, but she was a pretty weird character, as one-shot 2-hour characters go. And I've been dying to write Ed/German!Al again, and not being able to come up with a semi-believable plot that doesn't over-play the angst or anything, so this was good for me. Had fun.

enigmaroolz August 23 2006, 02:29:43 UTC

Ah, very nice! --smiling-- Thank you for sharing. I like your subtlety here.

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 05:45:03 UTC

Ooh, icon. I likes the icon much. *admires*

And there is subtlety; I am sucessful! Hurrah!

enigmaroolz August 23 2006, 14:47:41 UTC

The icon was posted in the community some time back and is free for the taking, as long as it's creditted. If you'll go to my userpics to get the credit, feel free to gank it for yourself!

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 14:53:22 UTC

Oh. Cool. Thanks; the world needs more Roy/Ed. It's funny.

chrstphrl August 23 2006, 09:43:21 UTC

Very nice!

gelfling8604 August 23 2006, 14:50:06 UTC

It's got German-Al; it's all good :D