Haunting and completely IC...I always hated a pussy cloud, and too many authors try to make him whiny or weepy. Good flow--it kept my interest for the duration of the story. I am going to check out the continuation right now. Great fic!
I was worried he'd get a bit too angsty, but then kept on thinking, "In some ways, he's bad ass." Haunting is a good word; still kinda surprised by how long this came out to be, though.
Yes! I did manage surreal-ness! Woot! Also, did you read the second half? It goes on a bit further; the whole thing wouldn't fit in one LJ post, I'm afraid.
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*flails about*
It's surreal and haunting but still harsh and gritty and perfect.
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Also, did you read the second half? It goes on a bit further; the whole thing wouldn't fit in one LJ post, I'm afraid.
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Wow, this was one of the best Cloud/Kadaj fics I've ever seen!
Good Work!
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