Drabble: Winter: Ed/Alphonse Heiderich

[gelfling8604]

Winter
Ed/Heiderich
PG 13
ANGST! Boo yeah! Hopefully not overdramatic or overbearing (tried to keep that from happening). Spoilers for movie, even though it’s set BEFORE the movie. Description of winter in Munich, Alphonse Heiderich edging in at the corners, and time. For 15minuteficlets.
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[yumeno_shiro]

suffering from a writer’s block and sinus headache simultaneously, ergo not even that much of a hint of porn.
*laughs* I think you need the "Hentai Inside" bag ^^.

I think you could incorporate a lot of your Ed/Munich Al fics together, they follow a similar trend (Al is not Al). String them together, maybe give it a central plot.

And yes, it is bloody FREEZING in Munich winters. Thus the beerhalls. And people feeling pissy-revolutionary in them.

[gelfling8604]

I DO need a hentai bag; it would make things so much easier *wibbles*

I'm in a wibbly mood. I'm at school! Early! So early!

Mmmm...beerhalls. So nummy. I could go for a beerhall about now...My throat still hurts. Stupid. Dumb throat.

[yumeno_shiro]

Beer is not good for a sore throat. You need tea. In quantity.

Yeah...wibbling. *wibbles with you*

[gelfling8604]

YES. I drank much tea--hot tea too, so much I got sick of it 0o Much tea was drank.

It's a wibbly kind of weak: It's sort of bad, it's sort of happy, I'm really "GEEZ I wish it was still July at Sea World"-ish. Because...that was GOOD.
*sniffle*

[reimars]

Both his right arm and left leg connection ports stung like lemon and salt on an open wound, right in the center where he couldn’t scratch.
I really like your use of imagery in your metaphors. It's always really lovely, even when the thought of it almost makes me flinch like here.

Ooh, a long Ed/Heiderich fic! *waits patiently*

[gelfling8604]

Metaphor PAIN, because I'm in a block aaaaannnnddd...I couldn't think of anything else to do 0o And it was bad. And sad. And that rhymes badly but...

Yes! Long Heiderich fic and one day, ONE DAY, I'll have an ending to it! I think I'm going to have to cut a lot of what I have already and make it clearer, because right now it's just...too much, and a bit too confusing.

[andarton]

The imagery in this depresses me horribly. Maybe that's because I'm sitting in my house waiting for a hurricane to hit and my mom's playing sad music. Or maybe it's because the imagery is actually depressing. I can't be certain.

I kinda like the overdramatic overbearingness of it. But then I'm more of an angst fan than you are. XD I really like the way you described things..

[gelfling8604]

...You're in the way of the HURRICANE????

And...it's been a while since I checked my email, so are you ok? Still living? Your LJ's still active--I haven't done ANYTHING online for the longest time, school's killed me--but the hurricanes...are giving everyone hell. The second doesn't sound quite as bad though. Crap. That's. BAD.

I am not an angst fan--I angst on occassion, but then it's more bitey-angry-COLD angst than anything else ^^;;;;

Hope your ok! Talk to me!

[andarton]

Was in the way of it. But I lived. Of course I lived. Takes more than a hurricane to kill me!!

Ah, I'm sorry that school's killed you. I was wondering where you'd gone!

I noticed. But that's okay! It's good to not overdo the angst and whatnot. I overkill on angst all the time. My journal is an emo-whore--and it needs to cut that out. XD

Thank you! I am okay! I am talking!

[gelfling8604]

Talking is good! Surviving hurricane is BETTER!

Yeah--I just get iffy around angst, so I try to hide it in things ^^;;