Drabble: Naruto: Liquid Candy: SasuNaru

[gelfling8604]

Liquid Candy
R for slight sexual content
SasuNaru
420 Words
SasuNaru in Season 2; warning for spoilers! Spoilers! Er...bondage, evil/slinky dark Sasuke, and licking. Um. Yeah. I cough with embarrassment.

Comments

[fickle_goddess]

Gods that's lovely. *_* I swear, the idea of blood being liquid candy? Yummy. Deliciously wrong.

not like a kitten, but like a tiger through razor blades, explosives, and gun shots.

And that line utterly rocked. It's just so Sasuke, and prettily written.

Then again, this drabble as a whole is well-written, and utterly lovely. XD *applauds and adds to memories*

[gelfling8604]

Mmm...it's very yummy, and even more yummy because it's wrong. I like playing with the idea of an older, evil-er Sasuke who's slightly more sadistic and not so shy or self-concious; I can actually see him doing this, but until Kishimoto lets us know what Sasuke's REALLY like now, we don't really know 00

Still, I like the idea...And it's bondage Naruto! Bondage Naruto! That's always fun!

[souvraya]

This is absolutely lovely. In a wrong, but enticing way.

He'd spent the last two hours slicing off Naruto's shirt and jacket with artistic deliberation--he was considering Naruto's pants next.

I can so see this happening... I always knew that deep down, Sasuke was a sadistic little artist... ^^

So cookies to you for another excellent piece of work!

[gelfling8604]

Wrong is a good word; wrong describes it very nicely. I wanted something that was dark and slightly naughty, but short too; plus playing with older Sasuke! Older Sasuke! Yay! And cookies are yummy; I love cookies.

[haruba]

fuck, that's hot *________* WHYYYYY don't you expand on this? Make it longer. Add the really, really evil smex, it would make me unbelievably happy. I'm almost tempted to offer you money for it *drools*

[gelfling8604]

I loved writing this; so much! So very much...and Renji icon! Renji! Much love for Renji too.
I'm half-tempted to keep going with the idea, and at the same time no where to go with it. I might just drag it along and see what happens. Smexy is good though; definitely what I was aiming for. Dunno though... ^_^

Oh yeah! Hope you don't mind, but I linked your website's chapter pages when I did the Attraction archive on my last posts. Er...hope that's okay...

[haruba]

So long as it doesn't kill my bandwidth, no ^-^

I loved READING it. I would do poke you with sharp things until you wrote more for this >D

[patosan]

Very nice in that wrong kind of way that makes things so enjoyable ^__~

[gelfling8604]

Precisely--it's bondage-Naruto. What's not to love? And evil Sasuke! Whee!

I always think the world needs more angry-bondage-Naruto; always always always.

[the_tower]

with a body like this...

*shivers* ooh, the possibilities...

YUM.

I think leaving sex out of it makes it all the more erotic. <3 way to go!~

[gelfling8604]

I think Sasuke's old enough and experienced enough to realize the potential a body that can't get hurt for long represents XDD
I really like the last line though--that either leads to sex or hissy "Well I don't like you either!" fits.
So much fun with this ^_^