Comments | gelfling8604: Drabble: Naruto: Jiraiya/Orochimaru: In Wait

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Drabble: Naruto: Jiraiya/Orochimaru: In Wait

Mar 18, 2005 10:04

Title: In Wait
Author: gelfling
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Jiraiya/Orochimaru
Rating: PG-13 for bad words
Word Count: 480
Disclaimer: Not mine, no money made, don't sue.

( More Sannin kid team-ness drabble )

drabble, jiraoro, sannin

Comments 55

the_tower March 18 2005, 20:20:33 UTC

hee hee hee <3 <3 I like this pre-fullfledged Orochimaru. There's something appealing about a creepy and odd character who's still (more or less) on the good side, even if he DOES stradle the fence.

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 20:27:31 UTC

There's just, just SOMETHING about pre-UBER EVIL Oro that's kind of...nice. I mean...I don't LIKE super-evil Oro--I don't. He weirds me out in icky ways, but BEFORE that happens, he'd be a little like Sasuke I think and...

I don't know. It's just...something to think on.

the_tower March 18 2005, 20:31:34 UTC

Yeah, I feel the same way. Whereas Sasuke was hot before he ran off, Orochimaru was cold, so that makes for interesting contrasts.

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 20:37:10 UTC

Also, I can't help wondering what made Orochimaru go all, you know, fatalistic and funky. He doesn't seem to be that way in the very, very beginning, so I keep on wondering what was it...besides the possiblity that he just went crazy 0o

Thread 8

spacehussy March 18 2005, 21:04:33 UTC

That is the best ending EVER XD This dialogue is just so perfect for Young!Orochimaru and Jiraiya. I imagine he probably was one really creepy kid >_>

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 21:15:13 UTC

One REALLY creepy kid--like WHOA, you know? Young Oro interests me...sure he grows up to be UBER creepy and too interested in minors, but while he's young he's...different. Shy. And that's interesting.

And good dialogue == ZOOM! Yee!

rianax March 18 2005, 21:17:13 UTC

Weird and wonderful. It is nice to see the hints of darkness in Orchimaru before he goes of the deep end. By the time that Tsunade's brother died, I really think he has not only gone over to the Dark Side but moved in and start palying house with it; the expression on his face before Tsunade saw her brother's corspe was positively gleeful.

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 21:21:28 UTC

He was HAPPY when her brother died--he was really, really happy, and it was starting to weird (Jiraiya at least) the others out. I don't know if Tsunade noticed, but Jiraiya did. But I agree--I kind of think he was already messing around with dead bodies when her brother died; he was about 2 years older from when we first see him in the bells scene. But...yeah. Oro's beginning's suddenly interest me--we don't know anything about them.

lunaneko March 18 2005, 21:24:26 UTC

You should watch new Naruto 126 episode, in Kimomaru childhood flashback - Oro was almost *gasp* kind...in a creepy kind of way, well, the usual, lol.

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 21:28:23 UTC

Ooh! Explain! I don't watch the anime, partly because I'm hooked on the manga and partly because I don't have access to it, but what do you mean? Like nice? Understanding? Or like, "hey, you're really good at killing people--if you do that for me, I'll give a cookie."

Kimimaru was cute as a kid too--very narrow face.

Thread 21

lunaneko March 18 2005, 21:22:33 UTC

Awesome! Man, you should continue, I dig Jiraya/Oro, heck, I'll dig ANYONE with Oro, he is a pretty twisted character to make any pairing fun...

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 21:26:27 UTC

Hee! Thank you! I've never held much interest with Oro until I started writing the younger version of him, and all of a sudden now he's INTERESTING, you know?

When he's an adult he weirds me out a lot, and while he's pretty weird as a kid he's weird with wheels turning in his head; I'm glad you like it though! It's a pretty rare pairing ^^;;; Not a whole lot of fans, I think.

lunaneko March 18 2005, 21:32:09 UTC

I saw someone do that on FFN, but nothing really to go ga ga over. I am sure you can make it very fun, in a twisted way, Oro/Jiraya would be nothing like Sasuke/Naruto, because they ARE different after all, but it would be a lot of fun. I was wondering, if Tsunade had a crush on young Oro, like Sakura on Sasuke? Young senin are a BUNCH of fun to write about, not everyone can pull it off though, but I adore all Senin fanfictions, too bad there aren't too many.

gelfling8604 March 18 2005, 21:37:59 UTC

Mmm...I don't think so. From the type of guys Tsunade seems to like, she wouldn't really like either of them at that age romantically--Tsunade's something of a tomboy, despite the way she dresses.

But YES--I don't see Oro and Jiraiya interacting EXACTLY like Sasuke and Naruto do--they're too different. There's some similarities, some of the same rivalry, but their histories are too different. I know Sunfreak did a couple Jirai/Oro stuff that came out really good, but that's about it.

Thread 7

the_loud_monk March 18 2005, 23:51:03 UTC

Why are you my first everything? First you wrote the first KakaGaa I've ever read, then you written "Attraction" Which was my first pairing <3 after SasuNaru,
AND NOW MY FIRST JIRAOROCHI?!?

Well, ... it wasn't really Jiraorochi, but I still loved it. Oh YES I did! <3 <3 <3

gelfling8604 March 19 2005, 00:33:26 UTC

I like that icon--that's a good icon ^_^

Because I am secretly a wizard of dark worlds where they don't have detergent! Yes! Fear the knowledge, for it is real! Really real!

Hehe--yeah, it wasn't a real pairing, but it was fun...maybe leading up to a real pairing...dunno yet ^^ Just having fun--and they contrast pretty well, you know?
You read the KakaGaa thing before Attraction? Wow, that IS rare--cool!