I casually glanced at your profile on FF.net to see if you had started writing anything new. But to see that you had updated this masterpiece was a shocker!
(I was supposed to be doing a paper in my incredibly limited time right now, and I'm so failing it. Because I just couldn't stop reading.)
The way you write your characters and their thought processes just drags you in.
Sadly if it takes you another two years to update it again, I'd still be checking... I would love to see you finish this. Your Naruto Epic of sorts.
I'll be checking your profile a lot more often now! ^^
Hee! Yeah, it took me a while, BUT it's still alive! It really shouldn't take so very long to write the next part--I hope--but it'll be posted on ffnet and lj both.
...it seriously IS epic. I did not mean for it to be this long, but I am pretty happy with how it came out :D
I am so happy that you're going to continue this story. I've loved every bit of the previous chapters. Every dark screwed up moment of Naruto and Sasuke interaction. Plus all the other good stuff too. Uber excited and just wanted to gush.
Wow, that was completely amazing.... I'm not a big fan of the Gaara part but surprisingly, I love the drop hint of Shika/Ino *hope there will be more!* I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet again, maybe it would be different if Naruto avoid him this time and Sasuke go fetch him or something. Anyway, amazing story. It's really creative and original, make you want to only read more and more!
Hee! Personally, I had a feeling that the Gaara part would either come off REALLY confusing (due to there not being enough) or heavy-handed (due to there being too much), and after a certain point I really couldn't tell which was which, so just went with it.
Glad you liked! Hopefully I can wrap everything up in the next chapter, and the epic (srsly, thing got WAAAY long) will be Complete.
seriously? How are you not professional? Andwhy are you torturing me by not finishing like dame DAMN! YOUR STORY IS EPIC PPPPPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEE FINISH...as nd added incentive il sell you my cousin...the one i liked...and the annoying one who stole my spot in the wedding
The sad part is, I DO have the last chapter mostly written...on paper. Just need to figure where I wrote it down and steal 3 hours alone with a computer and I SHOULD (but probably won't be) alright, but getting those 3 hours...damn, that is not so easy.
I like how human this Sasuke is, and I like how he just doesn't break or give up. I like that he's in love with Naruto and understands that he is, without losing himself to it, it seems to keep him together at the worst points in this story. He seems such a romantic character in the way that he's blindingly loyal to his family. I can't work out where any dislike is coming from towards him by people in reviews, what happened to Naruto was never his problem.
I never disliked him in the manga though, whereas others seem to.
Naruto is kinda cool and fun, very fun to read. And Gaara, I feel worse for him then anyone, he's never had anything, whereas Naruto did and chose to throw it away.
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(I was supposed to be doing a paper in my incredibly limited time right now, and I'm so failing it. Because I just couldn't stop reading.)
The way you write your characters and their thought processes just drags you in.
Sadly if it takes you another two years to update it again, I'd still be checking... I would love to see you finish this. Your Naruto Epic of sorts.
I'll be checking your profile a lot more often now! ^^
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...it seriously IS epic. I did not mean for it to be this long, but I am pretty happy with how it came out :D
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I'm not a big fan of the Gaara part but surprisingly, I love the drop hint of Shika/Ino *hope there will be more!*
I can't wait for Naruto and Sasuke to meet again, maybe it would be different if Naruto avoid him this time and Sasuke go fetch him or something.
Anyway, amazing story. It's really creative and original, make you want to only read more and more!
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Glad you liked! Hopefully I can wrap everything up in the next chapter, and the epic (srsly, thing got WAAAY long) will be Complete.
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Thanks for the compliments though :D
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I never disliked him in the manga though, whereas others seem to.
Naruto is kinda cool and fun, very fun to read. And Gaara, I feel worse for him then anyone, he's never had anything, whereas Naruto did and chose to throw it away.
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