Fic: Jenna's War II: Big Girl (1/12)

[gelbes_gilatier]

Title: Jenna's War II: Big Girl (1/12)
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: K+
Genres: Drama
Summary: There's good news and bad news for Private Jenna Melara... no, there are only bad news. And she wants to share them with all of us!
A/N: Um, yeah, so... it's been a while since I posted anything Star Wars and since we're at the beginning of a new year, I

Comments

[darth_eldritch]

This is interesting, I like the subtle meanings in the conversation. How Jenna acts is so normal in wanting no one around when others are clumsily trying to talk with her.

[gelbes_gilatier]

Thanks for the feedback :)

How Jenna acts is so normal in wanting no one around when others are clumsily trying to talk with her.

Also, we're talking Jenna here... letting others in isn't exactly her forte. But she's still one of my favorites to write ;)

[darth_eldritch]

It is different and refreshing because it isn't canon character or heavily pairing centric. I'm certainly not against those things, or having them as part of a story, but I like some genfic aspects to a story.

Chandrila is a good choice for a character's background as opposed to the usual Alderaan or Corellia. The funeral customs are a nice touch.