Fic: Silver (Rated PG)

Jun 01, 2004 21:56

The first of two fics. I'm still struggling to finish the one for the Gen ficathon--which is probably going to be late due to something related to Greenwich Mean Time. I know that it's the time over in England, but I don't know if it's four, five or six hours ahead of or behind my location. So I'm just trying to finish it before midnight, Eastern ( Read more... )

slash, remus/sirius, ficathons, author: gehayi, stories

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original_dessie June 2 2004, 17:51:27 UTC
Lovely ficlet, but so very sad. Chilling to think of Remus trapped here, putting himself through that. :( I may have to go and read some fluff to cheer myself up.

I really liked the amount of detail, though, and the structure was good, with the echo in the first and last lines.

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gehayi June 2 2004, 19:20:08 UTC
Oh, agreed. It is sad. I advise you to read fluff and HP/Discworld crossovers and camwyn's HP/Ghostbuster crossover and cheer yourself up.

I really liked the amount of detail, though, and the structure was good, with the echo in the first and last lines.

Thank you.

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underlucius June 2 2004, 19:44:39 UTC
really lovely. it reeks of his nobility without being too goody goody. I didnt know that about werewolf mythology, very interesting.

The tragedy of Remus is the most heartbreaking thing for me, and this makes it worse.

this IS literotica, and it doesnt even mention sex. Its love, and loss and longing.

Beautiful.

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gehayi June 3 2004, 00:15:03 UTC
The tragedy of Remus is the most heartbreaking thing for me, and this makes it worse.

It does, doesn't it? I feel so unbearably sorry for that man.

This IS literotica, and it doesn't even mention sex. It's love, and loss and longing.

Wow! Thank you. I'm flattered.

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dubaiyan June 6 2004, 23:40:03 UTC
Re: beautiful gehayi June 7 2004, 04:03:05 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the use of silver in the story.

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