Comments | gefenia: 36 - [Katekiyo Hitman Reborn] This is not your year.

gefenia

Feb 13, 2009 22:08

Rating: PG
Characters: Reborn, Lambo, mentions of others
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Summary: In another year of fewer disappointments, the candle which perched at the edge of his window against the windowpane, white and tapered and clean for more than ten years, is still unlit. Possibly for forever.
Notes: Reborn, Lambo at around ages 13-15.

( and tell me where all the days have gone, when you robbed my cradle -- tell me, mabel, where'd you go when you can't go on with this filthy fable. tell me, mabel )

Comments 4

azartti February 19 2009, 05:00:06 UTC

I really liked this. Good job o/ *mem*

celesia February 19 2009, 11:36:09 UTC

Pretty, but poignant (not that that's a bad thing). I enjoyed this. ♥ /mem

proboscus February 19 2009, 16:29:10 UTC

Jarring at times but poignant. You might want to check prepositions though, love! Otherwise, it was a good read. ♥

desumethis February 20 2009, 02:07:46 UTC

dhsgfahsdfas may I ask more about the 'jarring' and the 'check prepositions' part, please? ;A; I'm glad you liked it though 8DDD;;