34 - [Katekiyo Hitman Reborn] there is one that is very harmful.

[gefenia]

Rating: PG
Characters: Xanxus, Timoteo (ninth); other characters mentioned in passing
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Summary: Not for the first time he notices at how old he is, and though he's not afraid of death, all of a sudden, he's very much reluctant to leave the world anytime soon.
Notes: screwed up with the timelines. Set before the

Comments

[pekori]

You've got some excellent imagery and some stunning descriptions in this. I really like the ways you show instead of tell; the bits about the way Xanxus stands and marks his place in the carpet. Squalo's movements, predatory even for their defensiveness in Xanxus' stead. I also like how natural your dialog is for everyone who spoke.

I imagine writing for Timoteo would be tricky, since while we're given a good handle on his personality, there are still some blind spots in how he would really think. But this - this was really good. :3

[mlina]

...Was linked to this fic. I don't think I can say anything else except that this is utterly brilliant. I love your images and your prose.

<3 *stuffing in her memories*

[tokei]

Ninth fic~! ♥ Love Reborn doing his duty and giving it straight to Xanxus.

This reads like a missing part of canon. :D

[lifetocome]

Lovely description of the Ninth. Haven't read much about him but he's a really fascinating character.

This is the only icon I have for the time being that has Xanxus in it... XD

[snapdraw_gone]

This is very well written. XD I like the way the characters were portrayed before the Cradle Affair. The Ninth Boss is a very interesting character and I really enjoyed reading this.