<333 Yays. And I am cracking, or semi-cracking--just waiting for my beta to get back to me on the ending and a middle part that I changed and then posting ahoy.
Knife foreplay needs to factor in much, much more into, oh, everything. Mmmm, oh yes.
God, this was fan-fucking-tastic! Your descriptions of the fight, and how they're moving with and against and toward each other, until the end where they just have to split and go back to their seperate lives. It's just so right and so THERE. I loved it.
Jason is really just the right level of thinky for this to work out. He's paying attention, but not to the point of actually caring. It's awesome. And Rose just seems to go with it, after she gets over that initial hesitance.
I loved the notes of Rose pulling strikes. God, you scary kids having to lighten up so you don't accidently kill each other! And I also LOVED and can META about the dynamtic being Jay/Rose but also how it's SO TOTALLY NOT.
"I'm a little partial to the new one," he murmurs as he slips the guns back into their holsters and pulls out the knife, thinking about Tim, about the crazy side the boy refuses to play with.
This makes me want to add porn to my Bat!Tim/Jay. *purrs and clings* THE KNIFE. ACK.
Heeeee. *purrs and clings BACK* Yay is a wild understatement for my pleased.
He's paying attention, but not to the point of actually caring.
God, yes, I love that about him. How much he notices and absorbs and how very, very little he gives a good god damn about any of it. He's gorgeously apathetic in the right, right ways.
So self-serving.
This makes me want to add porn to my Bat!Tim/Jay.
Oh GOOD. Porn should be added.
They are having sex over Dick and Tim!
Heh. God, yes. How could they not, honestly, with both their buckets of damn issues and their Robin kink. I love it when people have sex over other people while they have it over themselves.
Rose is bitter because she doesn't know for sure what Dick would taste like.
So hot.
Soso glad you loved this and your comment rocks my socks off. (He so did win and she so, so should run. Far.)
*draws armed hearts all over this snippet and them*katarikMarch 18 2007, 16:04:09 UTC
My initial reaction was *quite* vulgar, so after sleeping on it I'm ready (hopefully) to be coherent.
Reaction two: MAN. I. Goodness. That's Rose, all right, and that's a Jason who would mess with Mia.
I love how the violence isn't even a *little* distant from the sexuality, and the Robin issues all *through*, and HA, the daddy issues made me snicker, and also wow, that's hot.
I also love beyond words that Rose is *good*. Because she could fight before Slade ever got his hands on her, and she killed before she was Ravager. She *should* be good.
Re: *draws armed hearts all over this snippet and them*geeksicle_kezzyMarch 18 2007, 20:30:21 UTC
Hee. *so beyond pleased* Oh good, I love vulgar reactions and just know, full coherency is never necessary. God knows how rarely I achieve it.
I love GA 71, loved that they took Jason there and it was just so, so right I couldn't resist figuring out who he'd visit next. My brain completely isn't ready for him to visit Cassandra yet.
I also love beyond words that Rose is *good*.
God, yes, I feel exactly the same way. I don't see the sense in redeeming characters--I love my bastards as they are--but with Rose it's different, she is good and she was a killer before Ravager and she's a bad ass before Daddy even got close to her. The sharp edges and ragged ends of her were there long before the Secret Daddy Sauce and she completely needs credit for it.
Thank you insanely much, glad this was as hot and dirty as I felt it should be.
Oh, this was so Jason and so Rose and they were as hot and dirty together as they ought to be. I love the undercurrent of crazy to them both, aptly so, and the sheer violence in everything they did. I loved their talk of the Robins they both knew, their bluntness, their honesty. Mostly I just loved seeing these two together, filthy and rough and gorgeous. Fantastic job!
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Still my favorite line of this whole thing.
Also, knife-foreplay makes me shivery and happy.
*HEART*
I love it so much--but you already knew that. I can only go on so much before it's completely redundant.
Now get crackin on the other one woman!
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Knife foreplay needs to factor in much, much more into, oh, everything. Mmmm, oh yes.
Thank you <333
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And yes, yes I agree. Especially with Jason and Rose. It is hot and sexy and, um, yes.
You're welcome! Of course!
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*works on more* Oh yis.
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God, this was fan-fucking-tastic! Your descriptions of the fight, and how they're moving with and against and toward each other, until the end where they just have to split and go back to their seperate lives. It's just so right and so THERE. I loved it.
Jason is really just the right level of thinky for this to work out. He's paying attention, but not to the point of actually caring. It's awesome. And Rose just seems to go with it, after she gets over that initial hesitance.
I loved the notes of Rose pulling strikes. God, you scary kids having to lighten up so you don't accidently kill each other! And I also LOVED and can META about the dynamtic being Jay/Rose but also how it's SO TOTALLY NOT.
"I'm a little partial to the new one," he murmurs as he slips the guns back into their holsters and pulls out the knife, thinking about Tim, about the crazy side the boy refuses to play with.
This makes me want to add porn to my Bat!Tim/Jay. *purrs and clings* THE KNIFE. ACK.
And then:
"Both. You ( ... )
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He's paying attention, but not to the point of actually caring.
God, yes, I love that about him. How much he notices and absorbs and how very, very little he gives a good god damn about any of it. He's gorgeously apathetic in the right, right ways.
So self-serving.
This makes me want to add porn to my Bat!Tim/Jay.
Oh GOOD. Porn should be added.
They are having sex over Dick and Tim!
Heh. God, yes. How could they not, honestly, with both their buckets of damn issues and their Robin kink. I love it when people have sex over other people while they have it over themselves.
Rose is bitter because she doesn't know for sure what Dick would taste like.
So hot.
Soso glad you loved this and your comment rocks my socks off. (He so did win and she so, so should run. Far.)
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*purr* Oh, yes. He always was, too, which just makes the time he was Robin even more interesting.
Oh GOOD. Porn should be added.
I'll get to work on that!
Rose is bitter because she doesn't know for sure what Dick would taste like.
*giggles*
*is twelve*
(He so did win and she so, so should run. Far.)
But her not running makes things very, very interesting...
This fic was AWESOME, so, yeah. Couldn't help myself.
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Reaction two: MAN. I. Goodness. That's Rose, all right, and that's a Jason who would mess with Mia.
I love how the violence isn't even a *little* distant from the sexuality, and the Robin issues all *through*, and HA, the daddy issues made me snicker, and also wow, that's hot.
I also love beyond words that Rose is *good*. Because she could fight before Slade ever got his hands on her, and she killed before she was Ravager. She *should* be good.
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I love GA 71, loved that they took Jason there and it was just so, so right I couldn't resist figuring out who he'd visit next. My brain completely isn't ready for him to visit Cassandra yet.
I also love beyond words that Rose is *good*.
God, yes, I feel exactly the same way. I don't see the sense in redeeming characters--I love my bastards as they are--but with Rose it's different, she is good and she was a killer before Ravager and she's a bad ass before Daddy even got close to her. The sharp edges and ragged ends of her were there long before the Secret Daddy Sauce and she completely needs credit for it.
Thank you insanely much, glad this was as hot and dirty as I felt it should be.
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They are so true to their instincts I couldn't not shove them together.
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