Drabble: 'Remembering' (J/E - PG13)

Nov 04, 2012 09:38

Started out well with mininanowrimo (I've only committed to 100 words a day) but then missed yesterday as I was gone all day and too tired when I got home -- fell asleep sitting up in bed with the computer open and ready and woke at 12:30 a.m. Oh, well. But here are the 500 words I wrote on Nov. 1 & 2 for the current prompt at blackpearlsails...

I remember... )

potc fic, jack-elizabeth, drabble

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felaine November 4 2012, 19:06:32 UTC
So sweet and romantic, love them together as a family but still poking at each other.
Good work.

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geekmama November 5 2012, 15:24:46 UTC
Thank you! They are never boring at least, whatever the circumstances.

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aletheiafelinea November 4 2012, 19:38:26 UTC
“Or maybe it was the first time I saw you, drifting about on the sea floor. Admirably silent you were then, as I remember.”
Dreamily-sad and funny at once. Yes, that must be Jack. ^^

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geekmama November 5 2012, 15:25:51 UTC
That's Jack all over, isn't it. Best character ever. I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you for commenting!

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geekmama November 5 2012, 15:26:52 UTC
I'm so very glad you enjoyed this. They are just the best to write, as you know so well.

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pearlseed November 5 2012, 07:42:27 UTC
LJ threw out my comment and I'm almost asleep. Will say hey tomorrow. Wonderful, just damn Wonderful!

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geekmama November 5 2012, 15:28:29 UTC
Oh, dear, I know exactly what you mean. Couldn't write a word last night (little grandson was here most of the day, which is always fun but tiring). I'm glad you liked it!

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sevanatwonights November 5 2012, 15:46:50 UTC
Ah...love at first rescue! Jack certainly did look besotted...and if it hadn't been for that gold he might had found a way to steal her away then!
Great story!

Cersia5

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geekmama November 6 2012, 04:39:54 UTC
Thank you! It always seemed to me that Jack took a shine to her right at first sight.

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