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Drabble: 'Island Insight' (J, E - PG-13)

Apr 06, 2012 12:04

150 words of CotBP Island!Fic, my reply to the current drabble challenge at blackpearlsails, prompt: Tantalize

( Tantalus: a Greek mythological figure, most famous for his eternal punishment: to stand in a pool of water beneath a fruit tree with low branches, with the fruit always eluding his grasp, and the water always receding before he could take a drink. )

potc fic, jack-elizabeth, drabble

Comments 12

aletheiafelinea April 6 2012, 19:17:27 UTC

*cough* Don't bother yourself, I'll be just sitting over there, grinning.
(Jack is sooo adorable when in danger! *g* )

geekmama April 6 2012, 19:47:27 UTC

Hee! Glad this glimpse of island life amused you.

pearlseed April 7 2012, 02:53:18 UTC

Oh Lord love a duck!!! I think I am well and truly smitten. You know you always got the right nice touch, but this time I think, naw I know you've gone to the head of the class with being that special (devil-ly) Jack on the shoulder. This is just perfect, truly fine in thought word and deed.

"modest linen...untouched bosom ... clear evidence that the breeze is waxing chill...
He clears his throat, stifling a groan. Or possibly a whine" and then the bestest at the last!! A classical education!!!!!!! Damn, chile, you are hot!

geekmama April 11 2012, 04:53:14 UTC

Damn, chile, you are hot!

You, of course, posted the inspiring prompt. *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed Jack's discomfort. Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

geekmama April 12 2012, 01:37:14 UTC

Damn, chile, you are hot!

You, of course, posted the inspiring prompt. *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed Jack's discomfort. Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

triskellion April 8 2012, 17:21:20 UTC

Oh my.... How difficult to be a pirate and a good man.

geekmama April 12 2012, 05:08:28 UTC

True. It's a fascinating dichotomy. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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geekmama April 12 2012, 05:09:10 UTC

Thank you!

phoenix_9664 April 10 2012, 02:57:02 UTC

Wonderful drabble! So complete and self-contained. And sexy. Lord, I miss that island.

geekmama April 12 2012, 05:10:28 UTC

We all miss that island.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!