Longish drabble: 'Ménage à Trois' (Post-AWE J/E - PG13)

Jan 22, 2012 15:46

A reply to the current blackpearlsails drabble challenge, prompt: Shipwreck. It's more like 500+ words, but what can I say? I'm out of practice? Unbetaed, too, which is worse, but hopefully not too full of errors.

“A penny for ‘em...” )

potc fic, jack-elizabeth

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aletheiafelinea January 23 2012, 00:06:21 UTC
*purrrrs*

I shall have my revenge, you just wait, Jack Sparrow.
Does it mean... a captainly blush? *evil smirk*

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geekmama January 23 2012, 00:19:55 UTC
I'm quite sure it does. *g*

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aletheiafelinea January 23 2012, 01:19:15 UTC
And I'm not sure if it's feasible. *g*

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geekmama January 23 2012, 01:27:09 UTC
Difficult to imagine, but interesting to research. ;)

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tiamary January 23 2012, 06:17:19 UTC
What a fascinating world. Thanks for your story, it took me right to that place.

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geekmama January 23 2012, 16:24:56 UTC
I really enjoy fic about Shipwreck Cove, one of the best ideas to come out of AWE. Thank you so much for reading and commenting -- I'm glad to know you enjoyed the visit!

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phoenix_9664 January 24 2012, 01:25:39 UTC
I loved this! Took me right to the place, too. And it's amazing how sexy it is--the way you conjure that moment "after" is splendid. Thanks for a lovely morsel on a hungry day.

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geekmama January 24 2012, 14:43:38 UTC
You're very welcome! I'm so glad to know you enjoyed it. :)

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ladymouse2 January 24 2012, 01:44:22 UTC
Just a lovely interlude and so delightful to find something tasty after the coast down from the holidays.

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geekmama January 24 2012, 14:45:38 UTC
That post-holiday thing is a troublesome kind of blues. More pirate!fic is an excellent antidote, I must agree. I'm so glad you enjoyed this instance. Thank you very much for reading and commenting!

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hereswith January 25 2012, 21:57:23 UTC
Lovely scene between them! I can imagine that would be a favourite spot, it sounds like an amazing view, and it's certainly a fascinating place, Shipwreck Cove.

“I’ll go easier next time, shall I?” he murmured, with spurious sympathy. “Not if I have anything to say about it” ... “I shall have my revenge, you just wait, Jack Sparrow. But… not just now.” That exchange is wonderful. And a captainly blush, yes, I do wonder if that can be achieved at all ;-)

I also really liked Elizabeth's: "And Shipwreck City, like some nightmare castle, monstrous, rising up and up, with a thousand lanterns glowing like diamonds." And how the place gave her hope even so. Also, how she she looked back, calm and certain.

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