Drabble: 'Homecoming' (J/E - PG)

Jul 18, 2011 17:10

175 words for the current drabble challenge...

Theme: Pilfer )

potc fic, jack-elizabeth, drabble

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pearlseed July 19 2011, 01:01:53 UTC
Absolutely too very cool! He would be grumpy if his stuff started to meander, although I can so imagine him being all chuffed up that she'd admit to missing him. Yeah, he'd like that very much. But for his kisses, a little manhandling might not be such a dreadful awful thing.
This is a tasty treat, got them nice cadence to it, flows well from one part to the next, yeah.

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geekmama August 1 2011, 02:41:52 UTC
I'm so happy you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much for commenting!

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just_a_dram July 19 2011, 01:20:42 UTC
Jack's variable reactions in this are just perfect!

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geekmama August 1 2011, 02:42:46 UTC
Thank you, and forgive me for not replying right away, I truly appreciate you reading and commenting.

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sharklady35 July 19 2011, 02:08:35 UTC
Aye, Jack probably doesn't like having anyone get light-fingered about his precious keepsakes. But he's got the ego to appreciate the motive.

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geekmama August 1 2011, 02:44:25 UTC
he's got the ego to appreciate the motive.

He certainly does, and the method, too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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whensheflies July 19 2011, 06:32:10 UTC
Eee! This was adorable. I love the idea of Elizabeth pilfering a bit of Jack's baubles for her own hair. Peas in a pod, those two.

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geekmama August 1 2011, 02:45:18 UTC
Peas in a pod, indeed. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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hendercats July 19 2011, 11:18:13 UTC
Perfect, perfect, perfect!!

This:
“Won’t,” he asserted.
is to love. And you follow it immediately with an echo (*bounces*) - I've always adored echos in fic! And I very much like the thought of this being on his return after OST.

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geekmama August 1 2011, 02:48:14 UTC
I very much like the thought of this being on his return after OST.

I like that idea, too! But... what about that voodoo doll? eeep!

Thank you very much for reading and commenting, and my apologies for being so late in my reply.

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