Fic: "Enslaved" (J/E - NC-17 - 3/4)

[geekmama]

Chapter One, Chapter Two, and...

Comments

[whensheflies]

Oh this story just keeps getting better and better! The last exchange between Jack and Elizabeth shows growth and passion between them. Just gorgeous.

[geekmama]

Thank you so much. I think, given the chance, that's the way it would be.

[pearlseed]

~~fans self to cool blushing cheeks~~Well, dearheart, this is definitely not a usual delight, though delight may be too mild a word for the goodness offered here. Passionate Jack and Lizzie threatens to upend any number of apple carts so to speak...really hot stuff here--not a surprize there, you being in total possession of your own sweet little imagination...Deep breaths and yeah, with the passion lying so close beside...is fury. Yep, well done and sounds just like 'em. God, just kills him to be ignored when he's being all one in charge doesn't it? Kills her that anyone on the planet might want to keep her safe when there's pirating to be done with danger and pain just hovering there nearby....man alive--I adore the line

“Oh, I can do it, done it before, darling, and I have to say it adds a certain piquancy to know one is performing for a hidden eye

[geekmama]

Thank you, ma'am, I'm so glad you're enjoying both the kinkiness and the love. One more to go, bright and early tomorrow.

[just_a_dram]

I am enjoying watching the development in the relationship between Jack and Elizabeth. You can really see it there at the end.

It amuses me that Jack (wisely, I think) isn't going to tell her everything. Out of either self-preservation or to maintain an air of mystery.

(This greatly amused me while I was riding a shuttle from the airport, so I have to give extra thanks for the good read!)

[geekmama]

Jack always has his secrets. So glad you found this entertaining on the shuttle! Thank you very much for commenting.

[djarum99]

Definitely better and better :-) Lovely descriptions, wonderful dialogue, and then of course there's their passion - you write it so well ♥ Looking forward to tomorrow - this fic has saved my post-holiday week!

[geekmama]

Post holiday blues are awful sometimes. I know exactly what you mean. Thank you very much for letting me know you're still enjoying. One more to go.

[ladyofthesilent]

I really enjoy this fic!
It's very well-written, I like the setting (but I've said that before) and all your OCs are a great addition to the PotC-verse.
I really liked that this chapter "forced" them to have sex for the greater good ... even though they kind of messed it up by falling asleep ;-)
Hopefully, they'll manage to save Elizabeth's crew, but I am confident they'll find a way ...

[geekmama]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this, thank you very much for commenting!