Backstory Drabble 18: 'Sharp Sauce' (J/E - PG-13)

[geekmama]

Only two more to go! This one would be 'R' if it was more explicit. Savvy?

Many thanks to hereswith for looking it over.

Comments

[sparrows_swann]

Hot, hot and hot!

[geekmama]

*fans you*

Thanks very much!

[anyother_world]

*squeal* Oooh, I love this! It's always Jack teaching Elizabeth new things, or otherwise being more knowledgeable in that field; it's so wonderful to see her learning things on her own, especially things that can impress him :)

[geekmama]

I think she has the ability to surprise him on many levels. ;) Thank you so much for reading and commenting-- I'm glad you liked it!

[pearlseed]

Holy moly, now that was a racer, weren't it!!

"Where, by all that's holy, did you learn that?" sounds Just Jack! sounds exactly what a mind-blown pirate might utter. Makes me laugh over what it might have been exactly would've stood Jack on his er, ear.

"Shall I show you?" Have 4 such simple words, in such plain juxaposition ever held such unseemly provocative menace? LOL over his competitive nature....

[geekmama]

From "mind-blown" to menacing is a short road for Jack. ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed the little glimpse here. Thank you for commenting!

[djarum99]

Oh, my....

*is incoherent*

"Revenge is such a negative word"

Fabulous, funny and sweet and hot as the sun ;-) Thanks again for posting these gems ♥

[geekmama]

So glad you liked the "revenge" line, I was rather fond of that one. *g* Thank you so much for commenting. Only one to go now! (I posted the sequel to this an hour or so ago). Yay for mini_nanowrimo!

[luvvycat]

(Sorry for the delay in Commenting! Now that my MerryPirates submission is done, I'm going back and catching up on the list fics I've missed!)

Wow! I really, really loved this one! So slyly erotic, with Elizabeth acting like the cat who's gotten to the cream! Whatever she did to Jack, it must have been mind-blowing! ;-)

I think that's one of the reasons Jack loves Elizabeth so much ... for all he's already seen of life, she has that capacity to surprise him! (And, apparently, did she ever, from Jack's reaction here!) ;-)

A smile touched his lips. "No worries, love. You won't scream. Much."

Oooh! What a hot/shivery line, coming from Jack! Sounds like Lizzie's really in for it (though I doubt she'll be complaining!) ;-)

Wonderfully sexy fic -- and leaves quite a lot to the (overactive) imagination!).

Beautifully done!

-- Cat

[geekmama]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, ma'am. They are a lovely -- and loving -- pair to write, as you know. ;)