Business with pleasure [1/?]

Mar 25, 2009 20:50

Title: Business with Pleasure [1/?]
Author: gee_tarded
Pairing: BellDom
Rating: PG (for now)
Summary: Matthew had been waiting for this opportunity to come. It was decide long before the meeting that his company would procure help from London. Dominic’s company was their best bet to acquire the right market for his business.Disclaimer: I don't own Matthew, ( Read more... )

business with pleasure, belldom, non one-off

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kazdehunted March 25 2009, 13:24:09 UTC
ooohhh...this is going to be good....

:)

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gee_tarded March 25 2009, 15:50:16 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. :) Oh I hope it will turn out good.

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ammee_bliss March 25 2009, 17:13:10 UTC
OH MY GOD!!!

What a cliffhanger!!!! *dies*

I loved this part so much:

Dominic noted how his hair was standing up outrageously, some strands literally everywhere, giving him a menacing yet sexy aura. His eyes were as blue as the water, twinkling yet, when examined, as deep as the ocean. A bottomless ocean, he noted. His lips were so thin and red, and he seemed to exude authority.

Ah! Wonderful!!!

Cannot wait for the next part! :) Well done xxx

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gee_tarded March 26 2009, 02:44:07 UTC
It's bout time I get my revenge with the cliffhanger. :p You lot seems to love that one. Hehehe

When I was writing this part, I told to myself I have to include Matt's hair and face description to spice things up. I love that part you quoted btw. Glad you approved.

It's not going to be soon though I'm afraid. Thanks again! ^.^

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ammee_bliss March 26 2009, 14:37:58 UTC
Lol, loving your icon. xD

Haha... Yeah, I guess we all want to great some nice cliffhangers, and also read them. ;)

Yes, we all love his hair and face, so it was good to include them. *nods* And no problem. I bet many liked it as well! *nods again*

Well, we can wait.... maybe. :P

And you're welcome!

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fenora March 25 2009, 19:27:40 UTC
=D I have to reapeat what others said. I sense a great story on the way!

I can't wait to read more!! hehe

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gee_tarded March 26 2009, 02:45:35 UTC
Thank you!! I hope I can live up to your expectation on the next part.
For now sweety you can relax on your sofa cause it's going to be awhile before I could update this. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

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dolce_piccante March 26 2009, 02:13:10 UTC
“We have some business to discuss.”

guh!!

i love all the detailing about the clothes and the business side of things...it's a nice touch to have things like that, things that are normally boring, paired with such a simmer sensuality that is possibly going to bloom between matt and dom.

matt's character is so hot lol...and i love your dom as well.

i can't wait for more!!! fabulous :D

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gee_tarded March 26 2009, 02:47:43 UTC
*giggles like a school girl*

Thank you! Thank you! It's so nice to read that especially coming from you as I know how good you are at detailing.

I'm in love with my Dom as well. :D

Btw, I emailed you. Have some question. ;)

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dolce_piccante March 26 2009, 05:30:36 UTC
dom's just so lovable ;)

i just emailed you back :D...i'm excited!

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problematique75 March 26 2009, 12:57:08 UTC
I love AU Matt and Dom! This is going to get interesting and I am already hooked! Looking forward to the next update!

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gee_tarded March 26 2009, 13:46:47 UTC
Weee! Thanks love for the positive comment. :) I hope I'd be able to live up to your expectations.

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