Before the Fall [Chapter 4]

[gdontop]

Rating: R [overall] PG [this chapter: language]
Pairing: GTOP
Disclaimer: Fine... I own 'em (in my head. Leave me alone ::pout::)
Description: Before man's fall from Grace in the the Garden of Eden, there was no such thing as sin. This is Jiyong and Seunghyun's love story. Set 5 years before the events of The Wages of Sin.

Comments

[xouterxfringex]

I feel like I have a love hate relationship with Vick.
He's so interesting and complex but such a bastard
yet I love whenever he shows up.

Is it sad that I felt bad for the frog?
I still sleep with stuffed animals sometimes. ;^;

I'm really curious to see where Seunghyun and Jiyong's relationship will go now.

[gdontop]

Vick *is* interesting. At least... I *hope* he is. He's a dick, but he's like an emotional cattle prod, too. Heh.

And I also felt bad thinking about the poor froggy melting in the fire ;~;

[peacensafety]

Vick is such a bastard!

I loved the GTOP moments you sprinkled in there! I like that Vick can read his brother like that, although I'm sad 'cause I don't think it signifies any special type of brotherly relationship between the two of them.

I can't wait to read your next update!