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gdgdbaby

[oneshot] someone you cannot reject, something i will not neglect

Oct 30, 2010 21:53

Title: someone you cannot reject, something i will not neglect
Pairing: jesse eisenberg/andrew garfield
Rating: pg13 for language
Genre: gen, mild romance, slice-of-life
Warnings: swearing, rps
Author: gdgdbaby
Notes: gratuitous character sketching and dissection. 2,805 words. thank you to underhand_glory and whetstone and warmboys for listening to me whine about this.

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fandom: the social network, length: oneshot, ship: andrew/jesse, #fic

Comments 43

kennyfrmthbrock October 31 2010, 11:58:34 UTC

This was lovely! I really like your writing style and I'd love to see more of this same verse. :)

gdgdbaby October 31 2010, 13:24:10 UTC

i hope to write more rpf in the fandom :D thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥

nikkikoala90 October 31 2010, 14:03:20 UTC

Oh my, I loved this. The characters were spot on, and the atmosphere and it just all worked so well together. So very well written, great job!

But... oneshot? :( Ha ha.

gdgdbaby October 31 2010, 14:17:07 UTC

sob, thank you so much, especially about the characterization! at times i was a little considered about its... plotlessness, but i'm really glad you enjoyed it ♥.

haha, about that... i'm definitely going to be writing more rps, but it was really hard to figure out how to end this piece, esp. because promos for the movies aren't over yet lol ;__; i might write a companion piece in the future, who knows! :D

underhand_glory October 31 2010, 14:41:51 UTC

ugh everything is gay and nothing hurtssssss

2 ME THIS IS PERFECT hsdfs the faux-interview at the end and jesse keeping track of their rotten tomato rating and andrew laughing at every joke in the movie

going from the snuggly football times to them trying to keep their distance makes it all the more painful and i'll stop here you already know i love this

gdgdbaby October 31 2010, 15:01:11 UTC

LMAO ♥

alsdkfjasd waylt ;____; sobs profusely into your shoulder. TY FOR HOLDING MY HAND ALL THROUGH THIS, GAH. this fandom is great, also ty for dragging me into it n________n

romancandles October 31 2010, 18:43:12 UTC

OMG THIS IS AMAZING AND GR8 AND PERFECT UGH THE INTERVIEW AT THE END THIS IS WONDERFUL. ♥

gdgdbaby October 31 2010, 20:09:42 UTC

ASDFJSLDK 8DDD I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED THIS BB TYSM FOR READING ♥ 8D!!!

taylorrenee_ily November 1 2010, 06:43:53 UTC

GD GD BABY BABY BABY~ Sorry that was completely random but I was so shocked (and pleased) at finding a random bit of kpop in my TSN that I had to share. :P

Also, this was fucking awesome. I love the way the interview bit completely complimented the rest of the piece without being overly sentimental and mushy.... it was perfect. Your scenes were short but all of them had meaning, and the characterization was spot on. When I heard they hung out at the Cheesecake Factory and went to Ravens games together, I definitely pictured something like this.

A+ job bb. A perfect introduction for me into TSN fanfiction :D

gdgdbaby November 1 2010, 06:51:58 UTC

HAHAHA oh kpop ♥ wassup, wassup, wassup wassup wassup~

eeeee thank you so much. ♥ i'm really glad you liked that bit at the end! i was wondering if it was too much, but i'm glad it worked for you :) and ack, of course characterization is always a bit worrying when you're writing for a new fandom, but it's great that you enjoyed it. i've actually been to inner harbor and the federal hill park, so that part was especially fun to write :')

tysm, sob. i'm so honored! ♥