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We face the same rain [Uruki - Oneshot]

Oct 03, 2010 12:51

Title: We face the same rain
Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Angst, romance, fluff
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters in the story.
Rating: PG
Band: the GazettE
Pairings: UruhaxRuki
Synopsis: A year and a half has passed with varying events, all with similar significance- and now they are seated, further apart than ever, as the rain ( Read more... )

fanfic, fic: rain, uruki

Comments 7

purity_of_soul October 3 2010, 15:41:50 UTC

i'm speechless honestly.

I couldn't say anything as the scene played out right infront of my eyes.
the way you wrote is in a perfect flow. simple yet deep in it's own way.

even tho the cliche' walking together under the rain, i still find it cute and romantic! XD

nicely done. > w

gazerawker October 3 2010, 15:47:00 UTC

Thank you very much! ^^
Haha, yeah, I was a little concerned about it being too cliché, if you know what I mean, but I think a little bit of a cliché atmosphere isn't too bad xD

purity_of_soul October 3 2010, 16:03:20 UTC

hahaha and im loving your kai approved icon. may i take it? > w

gazerawker October 3 2010, 16:06:11 UTC

I didn't make it but I'm sure it'd be ok if you credit :3 it's by hystric_honey

Thread 5

peridotpetals October 9 2010, 00:54:46 UTC

I loveeeeeee fanfics that have something to do with the rain!! LAWL Maybe because I read too many mangas that has to do with a couple sharing an umbrella. *flail* :3333 x3 xDDDD

Ahahaha~ Anyways, I felt the sadness and the nervousness Uruha was feeling here when he stares at Ruki. It touched me to know that he wanted so bad to comfort him. It shows how complex their feelings are for each other. ♥ ♥

And awwwww...my face was like:

(TT_______TT)

After Reita cheated on Ruki. I mean, come on Reita, you can't resist Ruki!?!?!? xDDD LOLOLOL I'm not making any sense here. xDDDDDD (-_____-)

Uruha and Ruki are both hurt and maybe they'll let their wounds heal together? Kyahhhhhh~ How cute. ♥ xD :3

The feeling is brief and sudden but I can feel it there, clasping fragile parts of me together, with his hand on my cheek- as if he is holding me together.

and

Our closeness evaporated into the air, and I had to watch as it rained around me in the months that passed.

...awwwwww...(T ~ T)

gazerawker October 9 2010, 10:41:58 UTC

Ah, this is such a lovely comment, thank youuu<3
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes I write stuff fearing it's too cheesy/cliché to be real or doesn't make sense or something.. but you reassured me ^^
I'll be sure to write more rain-based fics in the future, haha~ I quite like the theme of rain in writing c: