Not Long Enough

[gayeld]

Disclaimer: I have a crazy sister and a minivan with almost 100,000 miles. No hot boys. No Impala.

Summary: Victor wants to know.

Author’s Notes: *hugs Keri* I have my Beta back. Thank God, because seriously, I pined while she was away. And possibly posted a couple of things with way too many commas.

Comments

[garnet_words]

Aw man, I miss Victor. This was awesome. *loves*

[gayeld]

*sniffle* Yeah, I really miss him too. He was a seriously awesome character. Even before he saw the light, I still loved the character. Damn, Kripke!

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.

[apgeeksout]

This is great! I loved the FBI sub-plot.

Your outsider POV on los bros. Winchester is excellent & I like the present tense; it's really effective here since we know they're gearing up for a pretty big action sequence.

[gayeld]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story. I really loved Victor (even when he was after the boys) and I'm still heartbroken about losing him.

[deluweil]

This was really awesome!! Well done:)

[gayeld]

Thanks! It was fun to write Victor and Dean, I really think they would have worked so well together now that they were on the same team.

[deluweil]

So true!! *nodnod*

[mtee]

Great story. I thought Victor and Dean could be friends - he would have been a good hunter. I miss him as well.

[gayeld]

Thanks. Yes! Victor and Dean would have been awesome hunting partners (to the point, I'm sure, that little Sammy would've been a little jealous of how well they worked together.)

[redrikki]

Awesome. I love the details about Sam Victor picks up on and how freaked out he is by the newer, scarier Sam. I wrote something similar just after the episode aired in Bonnie and Clyde. Nice to read some one else who's on the same page.

[gayeld]

Those few moments when Sam seemed to be seriously considering Ruby's plan were the only time that Sam's behavior has kind of freaked me out a little. The Sam who spent most of Season 2 worrying about going darkside would not have just stood back and offered to hold Ruby's coat while she cut out the virgin's heart.

I really liked yours, it was a very realistic take on what Victor would have made of it. This reminds me that I keep wanting to read (or get in and write) a missing scene where Dean gloats over the fact that even the FBI knows Sam's a girl. *g*