i can't even tell you how much i enjoyed this? like, that photoset's been written before and there were minor grammar errors? but w ow i feel like this is the best i've seen so far ♥~
i liked how straightforward your style was and i really liked the dynamics of all the different pairings/groups. reminded me of everyone's canon relationships ("you know, we’re not like you, we’re not really a family, not like you guys. We just happen to work well together. ..." sigh) ("Hold on little dove, I'll make your panties wet yet" c':)
but that taoris though! just about broke my heart at the end ;n;
I'm so happy you liked it! It's been so long since I've written anything for anyone besides myself and yeah ;~; homygod i'm sure there's tons of errors I haven't had a chance to really read back on yet it but I'll be sure to reread it tonight~
But ugh you're too kind I feel so brain dead from midterms so I'm surprised any of it was cohesive in all honesty and yeah ;~;
homygod why are you so nice ;~; just like ugh lemme love you little dove for making me so happy *O* /flails with you
I seriously haven't written in like half a year so I'm still a little rusty and stuff and I need to crack my fingers and warm up and umm yeah I was really hesitant to start back up again, and lol the chen/luhan completely snuck up on me (so did tao's death idk what happened there the little bastard just went and offed himself without my permission) but yeah
<3 good writers like you deserve nice long comments okay
REALLY? damn, if this is what you're like when you're rusty, i don't think i'll be ready to read your writing at its best o.o like my next comment would just be keyboard smashing and wailing.
pmsl omg why did you let him get away with that TAO COME BACK AND LUV KRIS LIKE YOU SHOULD
//sobs ;__; I don't even think I'm capable of- I don't- exo- this is just.... My thoughts. So jumbled. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUU- dear god. Taoris. That was a slap to the face. But the hunhan. God. That was so sweet but the fact that sehun had Kyungsoo kill his brother... (That's what happened right... I'm not making up things ㅠㅠ) I though the chenlu was a nice little 4D twist to the story. BUT TAORIS. HOW. IDEK. Afnvbdiwnsosmck;
I totally know how you feels about your hand having a mind of its own JAHXUASMSJA oops didn't mean for that. (Haha I'm kidding that was totally on purpose :P)
Thank you so much for responding and sharing your beautiful work!! <3
omg my heart is broken what did you do to me how could you omg i am so crying my heart out here
i don't even know what to say i need some time to gather the shattered remnants of my heart i'm not even kidding
this was amazing, though... i love that gifset and this is so much more than anything i could've ever expected but why did you kill off my babies oh dear god
but poor yixing though.. eaten he was fucking eaten and then everyone just dies and lemme cry you a fucking river i'm so distressed right now i seriously wasn't expecting THAT ending like even as i was reading the last paragraph i couldn't believe yixing and kris and tao (?) all died i was sooo expecting someone to save yixing and kris to find tao and they'd live happily ever after
omg i'm so sorry idk i didn't mean to do this to you /crais
um um i'll help you gather the remnants and i'll even glue them back together with glitter glue and yea ;~;
i'm so happy you enjoyed it! idk wae i killed them off either i didn't plan it that way i swear! but then my hands started moving and my fingers started typing and the next thing you know there's a bunch of dead bodies everywhere '.'
lol crazy thing is that i seriously pretty much planned none of this like i was staring at those gifs and was like why the hell not and yixing's death just kinda sprung out of nowhere and kyungsoo with his maneating ways just popped up and tao, tao just happened ;~;
hogod where's the adhesive glue I SHALL GLUE YOUR HEART BACK TOGETHER I SWEAR OR TAPE MAYBE TAPE DUCK TAPE
what is done is done but it's okay i'm not holding a grudge u_u
glitter glue.... omg (preferably pink)
i know that feel bro xD when i write something it always ends up nothing like how i imagined it would be :3
well i bet writing without planning is a whole lot more fun for you too, not just the readers ^^ since you like don't know the end either, right? but i had hope for kris and tao especially /cries a river
no just glue it omg i don't want ugly duck tape around my heart :o at least glue will dry up and no one will ever be able to see it u_u
NOT ONLY DID HE HAVE HIM KILLED BUT HE HAD HIM EATEN THE HEARTLESS BASTARD (or idk because he was in love and his brother was a jerk and yea helpless romantic here)
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i liked how straightforward your style was and i really liked the dynamics of all the different pairings/groups. reminded me of everyone's canon relationships ("you know, we’re not like you, we’re not really a family, not like you guys. We just happen to work well together. ..." sigh) ("Hold on little dove, I'll make your panties wet yet" c':)
but that taoris though! just about broke my heart at the end ;n;
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But ugh you're too kind I feel so brain dead from midterms so I'm surprised any of it was cohesive in all honesty and yeah ;~;
/loves on you
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I seriously haven't written in like half a year so I'm still a little rusty and stuff and I need to crack my fingers and warm up and umm yeah I was really hesitant to start back up again, and lol the chen/luhan completely snuck up on me (so did tao's death idk what happened there the little bastard just went and offed himself without my permission) but yeah
/loves on you some more
I'm happy you liked it *^*
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REALLY? damn, if this is what you're like when you're rusty, i don't think i'll be ready to read your writing at its best o.o like my next comment would just be keyboard smashing and wailing.
pmsl omg why did you let him get away with that TAO COME BACK AND LUV KRIS LIKE YOU SHOULD
/throws cupcakes
yes i will stalk all of your writing from now on
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;__; I don't even think I'm capable of- I don't- exo- this is just.... My thoughts. So jumbled. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUU- dear god. Taoris. That was a slap to the face. But the hunhan. God. That was so sweet but the fact that sehun had Kyungsoo kill his brother... (That's what happened right... I'm not making up things ㅠㅠ) I though the chenlu was a nice little 4D twist to the story. BUT TAORIS. HOW. IDEK. Afnvbdiwnsosmck;
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i'm so happy you liked it ;~; and yep yep, sehun had kyungsoo eat his brother nomnomnom
um um, IDEK ABOUT TAORIS TOO IT JUST KINDA HAPPENED BECAUSE MY FINGERS HAVE A MIND OF THEIR OWN THE LITTLE SHITS IDK WUT TO DO ABOUT THEM /sobs
the chenlu tackled me from the ceiling fan i dunno where that came from i swear o_O
<3
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I totally know how you feels about your hand having a mind of its own JAHXUASMSJA oops didn't mean for that. (Haha I'm kidding that was totally on purpose :P)
Thank you so much for responding and sharing your beautiful work!! <3
Ps. Oh mai god. Kyungsoo ate Sehun's brother.
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i don't even know what to say i need some time to gather the shattered remnants of my heart i'm not even kidding
this was amazing, though... i love that gifset and this is so much more than anything i could've ever expected but why did you kill off my babies oh dear god
but poor yixing though.. eaten he was fucking eaten and then everyone just dies and lemme cry you a fucking river i'm so distressed right now i seriously wasn't expecting THAT ending like even as i was reading the last paragraph i couldn't believe yixing and kris and tao (?) all died i was sooo expecting someone to save yixing and kris to find tao and they'd live happily ever after
you broke my heart
but this was brilliant
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um um i'll help you gather the remnants and i'll even glue them back together with glitter glue and yea ;~;
i'm so happy you enjoyed it! idk wae i killed them off either i didn't plan it that way i swear! but then my hands started moving and my fingers started typing and the next thing you know there's a bunch of dead bodies everywhere '.'
lol crazy thing is that i seriously pretty much planned none of this like i was staring at those gifs and was like why the hell not and yixing's death just kinda sprung out of nowhere and kyungsoo with his maneating ways just popped up and tao, tao just happened ;~;
hogod where's the adhesive glue I SHALL GLUE YOUR HEART BACK TOGETHER I SWEAR OR TAPE MAYBE TAPE DUCK TAPE
/whispers thank you you're more brilliant
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glitter glue.... omg (preferably pink)
i know that feel bro xD when i write something it always ends up nothing like how i imagined it would be :3
well i bet writing without planning is a whole lot more fun for you too, not just the readers ^^ since you like don't know the end either, right? but i had hope for kris and tao especially /cries a river
no just glue it omg i don't want ugly duck tape around my heart :o at least glue will dry up and no one will ever be able to see it u_u
no problem ;)
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WAIT I NEED A WHOLE FUCKING YEAR TO GET OVER THAT FACT JUST WANTED TO PINPOINT THIS
I think i might need therapy now
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/whispers i love your profile pick kris yum
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