Voyage of the Dawn Treader 2/?

[gate_ship]

Title: The Voyage of the Dawn Treader

Summary: Lucy and Edmund are not the only Pevensie children to return to Narnia after all.

Characters/Pairings: Caspian/Susan, Peter, Edmund, Lucy, Eustace, etc.
Author’s Note: I still don't own most of the plot or dialogue. And did I mention that there's going to be some angst?

Chapter Two:

It took the

Comments

[ladyhawke01]

Great chapter, I was worried that you make us wait awhile, for another chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next, hope you do not make us wait to long.

Just a editorial note, in the sentences "I know for a fact that Phillip Rawling asked you out and you said know" should be "you said no".

[gate_ship]

Glad you liked it and thanks for the typo alert!

great chapter! :D

[anonymous]

Great chapter! I'm a sucker for anything about Susan and Caspian :) and I always prefer stories where Susan finds herself on board the Dawn Treader...and no star's daughter in sight :) well, she can be there so long as she stays away from Caspian :) Can't wait for the next one :)

Re: great chapter! :D

[gate_ship]

Let's just say that the whole Ramandu's daughter thing is ... interesting. But not in a bad way. It's more of like Susan wants to rip out the girl's hair.

[anonymous]

Great chapter! I love the dynamics you have set up by having all of the Pevensies (and Eustace) together with Caspian on the Dawn Treader. Tensions, romantic and otherwise, are sure to run high! I'm looking forward to reading more!!!

Ash12345 on ffn

[hairsprayheart]

Yay! Awesome chapter. Your style, simple but with rich dialogue, is quite reminiscent of Lewis', and that's a high compliment to be paid ;) Keep going with this.

[divamercury]

Lurker breaking the silence! Love the susancaspian community and I love this story so far! Can't wait to see how things go from here! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!!!