Yewook: kpop_prompts o12: Fool in love

Feb 12, 2010 06:59

Rated R, 6090 words.
Yesung didn’t want to be written off as a man foolishly and hopelessly in love. But if that’s what it took to accept the fact that he, truly, was gone for the man Ryeowook, then so be it.

A fool in love )

genre: romance, rating: r, dedicated to: kpop_prompts, pairing: ryeowook/yesung, dedicated to: kpoppin, type: one-shot, genre: angst

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leezsha February 13 2010, 00:25:54 UTC
..they didn't end up together but ~ how tragic...
life is never really gonna be all too colorful ~ but neither white and black right???
I wish someday they meet again and resolve their questions for a better answer...*oh, wait what am I saying? idk...^^-

I love the way you portray things ~ it gets into me ~ and though I felt sad, I felt the emotions because I felt it in the writings...<3

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genisaurion February 14 2010, 02:30:24 UTC
Aw, thanks for the comments! And thanks for reading ^^

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thundersquall February 13 2010, 01:48:48 UTC
OMG WHY. WHY. WHY DID YOU BREAK THEM. WHY DID YOU MAKE YESUNG DO THAT TO RYEOWOOK. WHY DID YOU NOT GIVE THEM A HAPPY ENDING. WHYYYYYYYYYY?

BRB, SOBBING. ;_______;

(I must say though, I flailed quite happily at seeing a YeWook longfic. \O/ I liked the build up to this, it was nice and slow, good pacing. BUT OMG YOU BROKE THEM. *sobs forever*)

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/ninjas oh_hesitate February 13 2010, 13:31:32 UTC
because angst is always better :D

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Re: /ninjas oh_hesitate February 14 2010, 02:08:54 UTC
BUT THE BREAK-UP WAS OOZING WITH TENSION AND ALL THE GOOD STUFF /sobs AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO LIKES THE BREAK UP.

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headless_bex February 13 2010, 14:29:00 UTC
I'm not a HUGE fan of Yewook, but this really has something!
I love Yesunggie. DX But yes, he was a fool. Never assume.
Poor Wookie~ Course, his mind games were problems that wouldn't render him completely faultless, but he got the brunt of Yesung's rushed "feelings", unreadiness and eventual bail-out. Perhaps deciding to cross the line first was the less painful option.
Good work. I could tell it must've been a labour of love. <3

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genisaurion February 14 2010, 02:39:32 UTC
Ah, thanks for the comments, and thanks for reading~
I like the insight you have there. :)

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xelfishx February 14 2010, 05:22:21 UTC
WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO TO YEWOOK?
CRYING. SOBBING. WAILING.
유_유

But this was an amazing story.
I love the little details, and the way it was so well paced.

BUT YOU BROKE THEM.
;_______;

Teach me your secrets you bastard of a good writer

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xelfishx February 14 2010, 05:25:32 UTC

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genisaurion February 27 2010, 15:04:04 UTC
Haha oh han. this is why i love you so.
in a non pedobear way, of course.

thank you for reading~

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ranwae February 14 2010, 15:54:22 UTC
darn why does this have a sad ending :c

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genisaurion February 27 2010, 15:03:16 UTC
because i was feeling particularly... idk. /out of excuses.

i'll write them with a happier ending next time~

thanks for reading ^^

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