kyuhaemin: wanna play a game?

Jan 24, 2010 23:27

Dedicated to paralyzing_time, because we were both craving some Kyuhaemin. Even though she would do them more justice than I ever could. Aka I can’t write smut to save my life.

Title: Wanna play a game?
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae/Sungmin
Rating: NC17
Genre: Smut. Not quite PWP.
Word Count: 4387
Summary: Sungmin finds Donghae to be a ridiculously hot man, and it ( Read more... )

genre: romance, dedicated to: paralyzing_time, genre: smut, ot3: donghae/kyuhyun/sungmin, rating: nc-17, type: one-shot

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headless_bex January 25 2010, 10:19:56 UTC
AHH. AHH HOT. AHH OH MY GOD.
<333
You are THE definition of funny&hot.

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genisaurion January 25 2010, 17:48:55 UTC
LOL thanks XD

thank you for reading XD

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cherrybombb January 25 2010, 10:52:53 UTC
eeeee omg you're writing smut!
This was great, i like how they're playing games, and playing it dirty, with each other to get what they want. Cool, real cool characterizations. LOL at Kyu embarassed letting Hae top him, perfect.

Lol, you know when you tell yourself smut is never going to be what you will ever write again, it'll ultimately creep back to you and voila, you can't help it =|

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genisaurion January 25 2010, 17:48:37 UTC
DON'T JINX IT! XS is convinced that smut will never happen again.

I'm glad you liked the characterizations. That's usually my weak point, I think.

//innocence has been completely destroyed

thanks for reading~

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baby_buggs January 25 2010, 11:51:53 UTC
don't stop writing smut!!!!!!! you're good. ^^ and this was hot. XD

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genisaurion January 25 2010, 17:47:24 UTC
LOL thanks? XD

We'll see. If I ever write smut again, it DEFINITELY won't be OT3 =\

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teexsaurus January 25 2010, 15:11:41 UTC
This is probably one of the very rare KyuMin + Someone OT3s I am able to read. :D

Though the KyuMin shipper in me sees this entire game differently. KyuMin is for love; KyuMinHae is for fun. Just my two cents.

Personally, my favorite line, Kyuhyun doesn’t quite know where Donghae is in the room, but he doesn’t frankly care; Sungmin’s the only one in his world currently-as it should be-and the only thing he focuses on is encouraging him, urging him, wanting more of him….

Anyhow, you should NEVER stop writing smut. Good smut like what you write is hard to come by, bb.

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genisaurion January 25 2010, 15:24:28 UTC
I think I just won't write OT3 smut ever again. It's so awkward to write T_T
Unless it's awkward sex, and then it'd just be crack XD

//sees bias in your favorite line XD XD

thanks for reading~ ^^

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amillionsheep January 25 2010, 15:35:20 UTC
argh i miss kyumin and omg, i like srsly lol-ed so hard at your admission of change in character's POV XD

its all good :Db

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genisaurion January 25 2010, 17:47:00 UTC
>_> I couldn't write it in Sungmin's... I tried =\

kyumin~ <3

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