Dedicated to
paralyzing_time, because we were both craving some Kyuhaemin. Even though she would do them more justice than I ever could. Aka I can’t write smut to save my life.
Title: Wanna play a game?
Pairing: Kyuhyun/Donghae/Sungmin
Rating: NC17
Genre: Smut. Not quite PWP.
Word Count: 4387
Summary: Sungmin finds Donghae to be a ridiculously hot man, and it
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You are THE definition of funny&hot.
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thank you for reading XD
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This was great, i like how they're playing games, and playing it dirty, with each other to get what they want. Cool, real cool characterizations. LOL at Kyu embarassed letting Hae top him, perfect.
Lol, you know when you tell yourself smut is never going to be what you will ever write again, it'll ultimately creep back to you and voila, you can't help it =|
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I'm glad you liked the characterizations. That's usually my weak point, I think.
//innocence has been completely destroyed
thanks for reading~
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We'll see. If I ever write smut again, it DEFINITELY won't be OT3 =\
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Though the KyuMin shipper in me sees this entire game differently. KyuMin is for love; KyuMinHae is for fun. Just my two cents.
Personally, my favorite line, Kyuhyun doesn’t quite know where Donghae is in the room, but he doesn’t frankly care; Sungmin’s the only one in his world currently-as it should be-and the only thing he focuses on is encouraging him, urging him, wanting more of him….
Anyhow, you should NEVER stop writing smut. Good smut like what you write is hard to come by, bb.
♥
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Unless it's awkward sex, and then it'd just be crack XD
//sees bias in your favorite line XD XD
thanks for reading~ ^^
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its all good :Db
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kyumin~ <3
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