[fic] "Hold Fast 1/1" (BSG: Boomer/Tryol, teens and up)

[garnettrees]

And I thought I'd never write BSG fic. Silly girl. There but for the grace of the muse go I...

Comments

[adafrog]

Great story. I love how he realizes that he misses what he had, and knows that Helo has it.

[garnettrees]

Thanks so much! I'm glad Tyrol doesn't seem OOC or anything. ^__^
-Meredith

[raincitygirl]

WOw, this is great. Poor woobie Tyrol.

[garnettrees]

*blush* Thanks. Tyrol is a very woobie character.
-Meredith

Hi

[anonymous]

It was stated that G-Sharon betrayed the Chief, however if the Chief new the truth, that G-Sharon was being control by prior conditioning/brainwashing would he have felt as betrayed or would he have wabted to help her even more. What will happen when he find out the truth.

weissman

[poisontaster]

a place of murky twilights and achingly long winters, but Galen Tyrol has never had typical grasp of time.

Broke the bridge playing pyramid ball, back in the days when he was all knees and elbows

then he woke in the hospital, his sister grinning over the bed rail and saying his face might actually have been improved

He hasn't lost time, he's gained it, whether it's the hours of that fall, or the eons-- eternal snapshots-- that it took for her to step, so lithe and calm, out from behind that tree. He should be so much older, for the space he experienced then; his bones feel gnarled and changed under his still youthful face. It plays behind his eyes, all the time, how she seemed to come from the trees and the earth and the strange, heavy air of Kobol, stepping like one of the Lords from a shimmer of nothing and light.Okay, I just took up an insane amount of the comment box to quote your own story back at you, but these passages... Wow

[garnettrees]

Okay, I just took up an insane amount of the comment box to quote your own story back at you, but these passages... Wow.
Don't worry about it! I love hearing which parts worked for people best, and have specific passages quotes always makes me blush. Thanks for taking the time to paste it all in! ^__^

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story, and that Tyrol's charactization seemed right. He's a tough one, but my muse can't seem to stay away from him. Go figure.
-Meredith

[anonymous]

beautiful. i feel so sorry for poor tyrol (but i think he's still an ass for that picture of him in flight of the phoenix clubbing helo w/ a wrench)

when i came to the end of the story, you made me want for more... a trait characteristic to good authors.

i look forward to reading more of your work,
evonne (sorry i dont subscribe to lj)

[garnettrees]

(but i think he's still an ass for that picture of him in flight of the phoenix clubbing helo w/ a wrench)
You know, when I originally wrote this, I wondered if I hadn't given Tyrol a little too much of a violent undercurrent (talking bout Galactica Boomer's body parts and all). Then I saw that picture, and I thought-- okay, I really don't have to worry about it. ^^;; I'm withholding judgement until I view the ep and see who started that fight. ^_~

Thanks so much for commenting, even though you don't subscribe to LJ. I'm so glad you enjoyed the piece, and even more glad you took the time to tell me. ^__^
-Meredith