[fic] Be My Romeo - 2/2

[garnetice]

Title: Be My Romeo
Author: garnetice
Pairing: Eventual OT4, but there are sex scenes involving ofcs, Logan/Camille (plus James), and Jo/Kendall, and there are individual handjob and kiss scenes that involve Carlos/Kendall, James/Carlos, James/Logan, and Carlos/Logan.
Rating: M
Word Count: 4,363 (part two) (8,754 total)
Part: Two of Two
Warnings:

Comments

[swagtastickatie]

This was beautiful and fantastic and god I wish I had any sort of proper coherency so I could leave you a proper review or something but for now just know this piece is perfect.

[garnetice]

You are wonderful and brilliant and amazing and this comment made me ridiculously happy. ♥

[eviljellybean88]

dude! carlos just has so very many feelings! i love how it's an OT4 but from carlos' POV, i don't think i've read one like that before :D

and i love logan being a kinky bastard who's up for anything, that's just perfect :DD

[garnetice]

Lol, really? I don't read a lot of OT4 fic, but I think I've read at least one from Carlos's pov...but it annoyed me...Hmm.

Logan is into roleplay. I will never actually get over that realization. I'm writing sexy spy games between Logan, Camille, and Kendall for Chris, and I just keep stopping and shaking my head and going wth, Logan? Thanks! ♥

[eviljellybean88]

i do, i LOVE OT4 fic :D but it's always from kendalls' or james' or logan POV, rarely carlos'

yeah, i'll never get over that a kids show filmed logan from the hips up and showed him liking camille dressing up XD

[default_dollie]

This was wonderful. It felt like the yang to part one's yin as part one was mostly about sex/physical reactions while part two was more about feelings/emotional reactions.

The kiss is totally sporadic. This probably shouldn't have made me giggle, but I was watching Clueless yesterday and after reading that sentence, all I could hear in my head was Brittany Murphy saying, "I hope not to be seeing you sporadically!"

The legitimate giggle came from this: Kendall flips Jo, even though it’s vanilla or military or whatever [....]. Please tell me that the military was intentional because it's too funny not to be.

So, all in all, this was gorgeous. And I now love Carlos more than ever. ♥

[garnetice]

Ahahaha did it? This was actually written as a oneshot, but I fail at deadlines, so that's actually super cool. I'm going to pretend it was on purpose.

CLUELESS IS MY FAVORITE THING. OMG.

Ahahaha yes, it was.

Thank you so very much, bb. ♥

[lilahfrost]

I love that you can take something pretty damn messed up and make it not only super interesting to read, but also kind of heart warming by the end? Voyeurism with a heart of gold. I like it : p

[garnetice]

djdpadjkfap This makes me so happy. I...do not usually...venture off outside of my comfort zone, so writing this freaked me out royally. This gives me hearts in my eyes. ♥

[lilahfrost]

I'm happy to have made you happy! Pretty much everything you write gives me hearts in my eyes :)

[tammyvo]

Leave it to Carlos to be the only one who can be honest with himself. Flawless OT4 is flawless. Voyeurism has never made my heart swell like this. Feels weird.

Okay, and SERIOUSLY? Logan pining after James who is pining after Kendall has this special place in my heart that just HURTS. In like a super fantastic sadistic way that only you evoke. Thrashing in pain. But I love you.

Oh, and thank you. For Harvestfest. You're amazing.

[garnetice]

I seem to be having that reaction on people. O_O Like come, let me make you have warm and fluffy feelings about creepy things. I am not sure what that says about me.

IT CREPT IN THERE. I totally did not mean to! I'm writing Shakespearean kames right now, so James kind of got away from me, and everything else just devolved from him. ♥

Awwww. Thank you for being awesome and participating! now if I can get my way, we're having a big bang