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Blood and Feathers~ Part One

Jul 21, 2006 21:54

Title: Blood and Feathers~ Bound
Theme: 38.Dusk, 50.Alliance, 89. The First Time, 99. Beginnings
Claim: Death Raven/Orha gen
Rating: R-ish
Warning(s): Blood, a teeny bit of swearing and Raven’s…Raven-ness.
Summary: ( The First time Orha met Death Raven, he thought it was Death itself coming for him on the battlefield. )

Comments 7

lassarina July 22 2006, 03:28:51 UTC

I like this, it's a very interesting take on Orha and the bond between familiar and master. Very nice!

(And YAY for Magna Carta fic. we so need more members!)

givemewings July 22 2006, 16:42:12 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I'm really trying not to get too serious with the Orha+Raven fics, even if the game itself is incredibly serious because, quite frankly, I'm saving up all my angst for the Azel/Calintz. I'm trying to give the Orha+Raven relationship a kind of...best-friend feel, only the kind of best friend that does things that make you want to strangle them, even though they do it for you, you know?

(and OMG, yesss, more members would equal more fics, and more fics would be love)

lassarina July 22 2006, 17:00:01 UTC

I've cross-posted it everywhere I can think of. The problem is that I'm mostly an FF-fandom girl, and the MC:TOB fandom appears to be so small as to be nonexistent. I found the Softmax community and a MC:TOB RP, and that's IT. :(

givemewings July 22 2006, 22:00:03 UTC

Ugh, tell me about it... No love for the ToB yo! *sobs* FF? Really? Me too, though I don't write for it (FF makes me emo...all of them ~sweatdrop~) I found those comms too...although the RP doesn't look too active, yeah? There's an HTK icon contest comm too, if you wanna try there. But yeah...there'll be artwork for some of these themes too once I get off my lazy butt and draw, and I've already started the next Orha and Raven fic, so hopefully it'll tide you over.

erestine July 31 2006, 04:18:52 UTC

I really quite enjoyed this as an interpretation of a familiars relationship with the master. I had never put much though into this, so I find it very interesting.

It was very well written also. G'job! XD

givemewings August 3 2006, 10:22:05 UTC

Aww, thank you..! I'm trying to go for less of a familiar/master relationship and more of a 'kinda-sorta-friends' relationship with these two, because in my opinion, Orha's not really the type to treat a familiar any different than a regular Yason. Now Carian, Rothy and Azhadi...they're a different story, but I'm not writing about them, so Oh well! ^_^ I'm glad you thought it was interesting, and once again, thanks for the praise.

mythicbeast August 6 2006, 17:02:41 UTC

Eeeee, Magna Carta fic! And it's about Orha, too! *instant hearts* (Geez, I'm finding them everywhere today! It's like me writing awful Magna Carta fic myself was like yelling 'Open Sesame' at the gates of fanfiction...)

I think you've got that 'best-friend-you-want-to-strangle' feel to their relationship down pat. :D It's also pretty cool that you've actually given Death Raven... personality! Definitely a nice take on Orha and his familiar. ♥