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Fringe anonymous April 27 2012, 03:48:20 UTC
I absolutely love the Fringe reference in this chapter. I was very pleased with all 25 chapters. The only aspect that I didn't like about it was Matt's father. I just don't like the dude. But anyways, definetly good writing.

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Re: Fringe game_byrd April 27 2012, 12:21:14 UTC
Oh my goodness! Someone read this and left a comment! So few people do either! I know it's tough to like the characters here, because they're not really good guys (even Matt). This is my only story that's so morally gray.

Thank you so much for leaving a comment. I'm glad you liked it, and all smiley that you caught the Fringe references.

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dididouli June 3 2012, 16:07:33 UTC
I just read this entire fic in one go today... That was SOOOO creepy! And a really good read, it made me think. I'd really hate to have Matt's power now : I'm sure I'd abuse it, there is too much temptation.. The parts about Ryan even made me think of the stanford prison experiment.

I'm happy you have explored this aspect of Matt's ability, what he did to Sylar was simply mind-rape and noone confronted him about it in the show

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dididouli June 3 2012, 16:14:56 UTC
Oops the message sent himself before I could finnish but I just wanted to say that it was a really good (albeit uncomfortable) read.

Ps : Have you read the follow up of "the five husbands of mr gray" called "dollhouse" (I think) where Sylar realises he is mind controled by Parkman? (I can't seem to find the link or remember the author sorry but it was in the same vein as your story)

Anyway thank you for writing!

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game_byrd June 3 2012, 16:31:25 UTC
No, I have not. If you can link me to it, I'd appreciate it ( ... )

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dididouli June 3 2012, 18:08:39 UTC
Thanks for the recs! I loved the one by Black Sluggard (haven't read the other yet), so subtle and heartbreaking and realistic ( ... )

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