Comments | game_byrd: Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 45: Money Matters

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Bricks in the Wall, Chapter 45: Money Matters

Mar 09, 2013 11:52

Title: Money Matters
Characters: Sylar, Peter Petrelli
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Word count: 2,800
Setting: The Wall
Summary: Sylar stumbles onto an unexpected area of knowledge for Peter.
Notes: I woke up thinking about how Sylar and Peter were like salt (salt of the earth, very practical) and pepper (spicy and preservative), their initials being S ( Read more... )

bricks, sylar, rated g, peter

Comments 2

means2bhuman April 14 2013, 23:34:54 UTC

Salt and pepper! That's so cute! (I assume Sylar would be salt and Peter pepper? I don't know how pepper/Peter is preservative as I thought salt was a preservative, at least for storing meats in old days ( ... )

game_byrd April 15 2013, 01:15:25 UTC

An example of 'show, don't tell': Peter glared at him, nose wrinkling slightly as his fingers curled into fists. Notice how I never said he was angry. I did say that Sylar was confused in the next sentence and I'm sure there was a better way to have said it but that was what I went with ( ... )