This is so good!!! I can't tell you how many times I've been reduced to a mass of squeals or laughter or sighing or ranting cuz Sylar is so freaking dumb!!!!!!
I am really enjoying my re-read. And its interesting that this time I am sympathizing with Peter much more than I was before. I was on Sylar's side before. But now having read the piano bench chapters I am appalled at Sylar and I am amazed at Peter's indulgence of him, with the cheese sandwich, and agreeing to play foosball. I just feel so bad for Peter. You have written this that well that I am so inside poor Peter's head and heart. I want to smack Sylar, too. Again and again.
But I still totally see Sylar's side. You've done a great job at creating dissonance here between the two pov's. I, the reader, am left wondering who to root for and how this should progress. Now on to the next part!
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But I still totally see Sylar's side. You've done a great job at creating dissonance here between the two pov's. I, the reader, am left wondering who to root for and how this should progress. Now on to the next part!
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