Comments | galmaegi: [infinite] smart bomb (4/7)

galmaegi

[infinite] smart bomb (4/7)

Nov 11, 2013 15:35

smart bomb
infinite, hoya/sungyeol, yoonhye/hoya (this part)
pg-13; ongoing
ao3 mirror

pink is the colour (october 2008)
( Hoya’s staring as Sungyeol twists on the spot, watching the gentle swing of the skirt, and Sungyeol thinks he looks angry, almost. )

* sungyeol, * hoya, # infinite, # rainbow, * yoonhye

Comments 3

penny_lane_42 November 11 2013, 21:07:01 UTC

Oh, wow, this is a great chapter. The tension is there but you don't overwrite it--there's clues but you're not knocking us over the head. Really, really fantastic. (I'd missed this story!)

[eta] Your link in the dashidorawa post leads to chapter 3; you might want to edit. :D

galmaegi November 12 2013, 01:28:48 UTC

ugh how embarrassing /)__(\ i changed it as soon as i received your comment, thanks!

i'm glad you enjoyed this part, especially since it's been so long since i've spent time in this story that i wasn't sure if it would still work. hopefully it won't be so long until the next one!

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galmaegi November 15 2013, 12:55:21 UTC

to tell the truth, i've been working on this part pretty much ever since i finished the last one and looking at it now i'm not sure why it was so hard to write ^^; but i appreciate that you still read it and haven't given up on it. thank you so much for commenting. lots more tension to come~!