One thing you should probably point out to anyone you send this to: please read and edit the petition before you send it! There are some serious grammar and other verbal errors in the petition as it currently displays, including a crucial sentence where the middle is apparently missing, It's the part where the petition attempts to say that the goal of the ad - bringing awareness of autism, its effects, and the obstacles children with autism face in the world - is worthwhile, their methods are awful. There are quite a few missing words in the sentence, which seriously mar the cohesiveness and incisiveness of the petition.
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One thing you should probably point out to anyone you send this to: please read and edit the petition before you send it! There are some serious grammar and other verbal errors in the petition as it currently displays, including a crucial sentence where the middle is apparently missing, It's the part where the petition attempts to say that the goal of the ad - bringing awareness of autism, its effects, and the obstacles children with autism face in the world - is worthwhile, their methods are awful. There are quite a few missing words in the sentence, which seriously mar the cohesiveness and incisiveness of the petition.
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