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Oliver: Chapter 14: "Home"

Dec 19, 2013 16:14

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shadownyc December 19 2013, 23:31:06 UTC

I'm glad to see another chapter!

It's good to see how Brian loves his family and is willing to admit it and enjoy it.

Hopefully Justin's news won't be too difficult for them to deal with.

Great chapter!

galeandrandy December 21 2013, 09:42:54 UTC

Thanks for reading. I'm doing my best getting this out, but I've sort of been writing other things and because I got frustrated by not labeling all of the prompt parts, I had to just step away for a few days because I was beginning to freak out.
I really wanted to keep this as angst-free as possible, so Justin's news will be intense, but I had to remind myself this is a fluffy verse.
:) Rory

snow_white79 December 20 2013, 00:04:56 UTC

So sweet! You can really feel the love and warmth in this chapter. Looking forward to your next chapter :)

galeandrandy December 21 2013, 09:45:45 UTC

Oh, thank you so much. :) More is coming soon. I think I at least have one part that I believe stops correctly. Some parts are labelled in the document and obvious as to what word they go with, but somewhere along the way, (probably when I was doing some 'furiously fast writing') I just grabbed the prompt word and kept writing and writing and now I've got about 30,000 words in the middle of where I started labeling the prompts and then where I began to label them again, that I have to sort through.
I didn't make this easy on myself at all. I thought I'd written most of them down, at least the order of them, that would help, but no, no I didn't. :(
More is coming soon though, at least one tonight.
:) Rory

ntua December 20 2013, 16:01:21 UTC

Who can resist chubby babies? Not me! I'm glad to see you writing in the fandom again Rory! Good luck on your novel!

BTW, I'm pretty sure that Oliver is supposed to have been "pooping" vs "popping" in paragraph 10... ;-)

galeandrandy December 21 2013, 09:50:23 UTC

Oh, me neither. Of course, I can't resist the skinny ones either, which my Riley is very skinny, but he's adorable ( ... )

shenova December 20 2013, 23:17:05 UTC

Brian is back at home with his boys. Hope Justin is okay I am sure he will let Brian know what's going on.

galeandrandy December 21 2013, 09:51:21 UTC

Back where he belongs, yup. Justin is just worried mostly about Brian's reaction, he's very protective of him when it comes to anything having to do with his bio-'family'.
More to come soon, thank you for always supporting my fic.
*hugs*
Rory