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sandraj60 September 29 2012, 13:35:15 UTC
"Brian had nearly tore Justin’s pants off to lick the hot come from his skin as he pushed one hand inside his pants and jerked himself to completion."

HAWT! I loved flower printed shirt deal.

"By Wednesday, he felt sure that if he thought any more about himself or his relationship with Justin he would either become a self loathing pathetic loser or grow a pussy."

Ha! Loved that line.

The Hunter scene was clever.

I just read part of this last night and the rest this morning. Brian and Justin danced around a lot in this part of the chapter. Brian was afriad of his feelings and rejection and Justin was a fraid to scare him off. It has to be a difficult choice for a confirmed bachelor to decide to marry someone and a virgin at that.

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galeandrandy October 2 2012, 02:03:05 UTC
I'm glad you liked this part, I know some is much different from what you read before. Oh, how many edits did THIS chapter have? LOL!

Thank you so much for all your help with this fiction, Sandra, *hugs tight*
:) Rory

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sandraj60 October 2 2012, 03:58:30 UTC
Hey hon, I have finish reading the rest of it. Isn't there another part.

I'm going to look.

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shenova September 29 2012, 19:37:36 UTC
Come on guys sort yourselves out you know you both want to be with each other. Brian needs to be honest with Justin and tell him wants to be with him and that is why he went to see him but it didn't quite work out how he expected. Nice party they had and Hunter he made me laugh trying it on with Brian no chance there matey he only has eyes for one guy.

Poor Justin he is going to try and move on I don't think decorating a master bedroom is going to do that for you. Michael maybe you need to go and talk to Brian and see how he is feeling about things. On to part 2.

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galeandrandy October 2 2012, 02:07:49 UTC
Happy you liked the part with Hunter, had to give a little humor to a rather tense situation, glad to know it worked. Of course he had no chance at all! LOL
Thanks for reading,
Rory

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bubbafrogz October 7 2012, 18:51:50 UTC
Love the whole swim suit scenario!! The entire evening seemed like sweet torture until they separated in the end deciding nothing changed. Loved Hunter and the oh your great no your great parts!! Hope they get to the same page. and soon!

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