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if_i_fell1986 May 24 2009, 22:22:31 UTC
Part 1: Oh my. This chapter always gets to me. The bit in the first part where Dougie asks if Tom is his dad and Tom ends up humming one of his own songs made my heart clench and my eyes watering. The poor guy. I don't know how I would cope with all of that. This not knowing is horrible! I'd never be able to take it. I'd go mad with worry and stress and everything just closing in on you. And then Tom losing Harry. Ach! I'd sit down and start crying until he came back to find me.

Part 2: God, that's terrifying. I'm guessing the marching is the evil queen's minions coming to get them, but, whatever it is, I want Danny and Dougie to develop teleportation skills now so they can get far away. Preferably, finding Harry and Tom on the way. They both must be terrified. Danny running back towards imminent danger and Dougie having to wait. I don't know which is worse.

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bump tomsstargirl September 27 2009, 18:29:15 UTC
is there any more of this?? i was reading this fic on the official mcfly boards before the wipe, i love lies spin off stories so i was wondering if there was any more? if not thats fine im just curious!

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Re: bump galaxydazzle September 27 2009, 18:56:46 UTC
haha there is certainly more. Didn't know if it was wanted or not. Will post the next bit for you asap. :)

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Re: bump tomsstargirl September 28 2009, 19:00:00 UTC
yay!!!

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