CHAPTER VII

Oct 19, 2008 20:40


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babylon_whore October 19 2008, 19:47:18 UTC
Hee I've been refreshing adama_roslin like a loon for about 2 hours waiting for you guys to post. I don't care how insane that is!! LOL totally worth it.

I loved the interaction between Bill and Kara in this piece, very well done. And the card game was awesome. I think you've really nailed the Laura/Bill back and forth and his tendency to overprotect. Plus teh secks! HAWT.

As for the last section? LOVE.

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franglaisy October 24 2008, 15:10:17 UTC
Hee I've been refreshing adama_roslin like a loon for about 2 hours waiting for you guys to post. I don't care how insane that is!! LOL totally worth it.

YOU TOTALLY ROCK! IT MAKES ME GRIN LIKE A LOON TO READ THAT!

I have to say that such high praise from one of my fave A/R fic writers is just beyond awesome. Glad the card game worked, It was harder than we thought because little is known about the actual rules...battlestarwikki.com comes in so very handy for all things obscure! lol!

Once again thankyou for your awesome comment! *hugs*

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obsessive_a101 October 19 2008, 20:09:55 UTC
(0_0)... That was... amazing. And- and- and.... LAURA! HEE! Surprised everyone. LOL... and Bill, so sweet, and and the entire Gaius scene is so funny, and *chuckles* he's been fantasizing about Laura? Oh boy. Silly Gaius... I wonder what would happen if Bill found out about his fantasies. (^_^) That would be quite entertaining. Hee.

Anyways, I'm still as hooked into the plot as ever. I'm definitely already looking forward to next week.

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franglaisy October 24 2008, 15:13:43 UTC
Laura is amazing! You know she would totally kick ass at cards. I am convinced she has hiden talents! *giggles*

I wonder what Bill would do if he found out anyone had fantasies about Laura...hmmm, could be quite amusing.

Glad you are still hooked and loving it so far. Thankyou for your comment, it means a lot to us people are still enjoying this. :-)

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franglaisy October 24 2008, 15:14:27 UTC
LOL! Sexings is always good. Is it January yet?

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stiletto_freek October 19 2008, 20:29:14 UTC
OMG! YAY! UPDATE!!

Card game was totally awesome. Laura PWNed everyone! And Bill 'let' her win! hehehe

Secksings...lkjfskdjf..hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....

And part with Baltar was interesting..really interesting. Naughty Gaius..lol

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Best chapter this far! ;)

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franglaisy October 24 2008, 15:16:40 UTC
YAY!!!

Glad you enjoyed the card game! And of course Laura only won because Bill let her...*cough* Poor delusional Bill! lol.

Seckings.....hehehehe

Baltar is much fun to play around with. Glad you liked it.

ANOTHER BEST CHAPTER? OMG! This is a lot to live up to! *hugs*

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alexis_davis02 October 19 2008, 20:53:06 UTC
Another spectacular Sunday addition to this fic. I loved, loved the whole card game and the way you weaved Kara into Bill and Laura - the whole "family" dynamic coming back together.

The last section with Baltar was pretty damn interesting and I'm curious where you guys will take it.

And the sexings...SQUEEEEE!

You both continue to do Bill and Laura proud. Can't wait for the next piece to the puzzle.

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franglaisy October 24 2008, 15:19:44 UTC
Thankyou so much!

We wanted to make sure some sense of normality goes into this fic, a mixture of that and the pure bizarre! lol

We can't wait to show you all where we are taking this. It is so much fun to write and it makes us both extremely happy it is being enjoyed.

:-)

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