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[gal12]

The Ten Commandments...

You always watch from the shadows, wanting to be seen but not enough to draw attention. You watch them everyday, with hurt and longing, hearing their melodious laughter and beautiful smiles, always aimed at each other, never for you. You only want one person you want to smile at you like that, one person to laugh like that at

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[virginangelic]

I fear I might sound rude but I'll just give it a shot - I'm a tad confused. It's a nice read but still, I'm wondering whether Chunnie wants Junsu or Yunho.
Partly because of this two lines:

But for Kim Junsu, you'd go to hell numerous amount of times as long as you can call him yours and he call you his.

Yunho comes closer to you, still wearing that sad smile and tells you:

"I love you."

Do continue please?

[gal12]

lol, its meant to be confusing... i think XD and don't worry- you didn't sound rude!
and yoochun wanted junsu from the start. yunho just confessed his feelings for yoochun, but chunnie didn't say the same thing back.

thanks for reading it! and i'll try, that is, if i can come up w/ a good enough sequel. i'll try my best though!

[one_sour_cookie]

OMG!! This is SOO cute!!
First I was like all confused then I'm like "OHHHH!!!! GET IT NOW!!!"
It's so sad!!!!
Nice job!! ;)

[gal12]

thanks! yeah- i was in a sad-ish mood i guess. i guess its cause of this one spot on my back that really hurts XD weird

lol, when i was writing this, i got confused myself XD

[ladypurr]

Oh, now this is a nice twist! How will this pan out without one of them getting hurt? I encourage you to continue this and not stop here!

[gal12]

thank you =D and i'll try my best XD

[gal12]

thanks!!! and i'll try my best!!!

[deyanafu]

Poor Chun. I'm wondering what he's reaction to Yunnie.
I wonder hows Su too. Haha. This was great :D ♥

[gal12]

aw, thank you ^^i'm so happy!!! so, do you want me to continue it?