Im memory of Doyle...

[gaisce]

This is a bastardized concoction of "The Price of Business" and "American Gods" inspiriation. And I think I was really morbid when I thought of it last night. But it's here, and I thought the idea was worthwhile even if its execution is poor.

Comments

[anruitoivoa]

*sobby* wow that was really amazing. I loved all the historical allusions. It's a simple idea but i really do think the execution is great even if you do not. but of course the last line did it for me. *misses doyle* even if i didnt see him till after he died.

Da-amn

[skyebanshee]

Soo many references, that I actually understood, and used wonderfully. I think the mood was captured extremely well, and felt so...tragic, I guess (I'm bad at putting things into words). And I agre with An-chan, that last line was just so sad:

And as his last shreds of consciousness dissipate into the white, he wonders, like all the martyrs before him have, if it is really worth anything at all.

MelTalent still astounds me **huggles**

**snuggles to Doyleclone**