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gaiafaye

Heroes fic: How You Sleep (10/12?)

Mar 26, 2013 22:18

Um. Better late than never?

Title: How You Sleep - Chapter 10: Reschedule (10/12?)
Series: Heroes
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: R
Warnings: Mpreg! BS science! Fairly dark! Consent issues!
Summary: After being doused with the complete formula, Mohinder copes with a lingering side effect as he and everyone around him try to rebuild their lives and their ( Read more... )

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Comments 13

starrdust411 March 27 2013, 04:35:25 UTC

The trend of updating just when I'm about to go to bed continues and once again I was a bad noodle and stayed up to read the whole thing. Still it's late so it's hard for me to be coherent, but I'll try my best.

1) Yay! An update! You put me to shame everytime you upload a new chapter lol and yet I'm still delighted to see more.

2) Tracy's life is full of woe. I feel so bad for her knowing she could only feel the pain of their attempts to bring her back without realizing why it was happening. Hopefully someone can talk some sense into her before things go too far. Although the fight between her and Emma was really cool and her way of attacking Bennet came out more horrifying here than the murder attempts in the show. (At least, from what I remember)

3) "I watched someone with your power lose control... She ended up crushed under the rubble of a building."
You know what's horrible? It took me a while to remember who Claire was talking about here *shame*

4) "'I'm sorry I called your baby a tumor' isn't an apology I thought I'd ( ... )

gaiafaye March 27 2013, 23:13:51 UTC

Some things never change, including me writing at night. ;)

1) I think after nine months, this update shouldn't be that shameful.

2) Tracy tried to drown Bennet in his car on the show. I honestly can't remember if I stole that idea or not.

3) As we used to say in prime Heroes bitching days: don't worry, I'm sure the writers forgot about it too!

4) In an earlier version you got to see the whole house-hunting scene, but I thought it was too comic reliefy. I couldn't let that apology line go, though. Glad you liked it. :)

5) I think you will enjoy the next chapter. It contains the scene I thought of while reading your one story, the one that wound up inspiring this whole thing. :)

Of course who knows when that will be posted. I know better than to even guess at this point. >_>; BUT THIS WILL BE FINISHED, BY GOLLY.

alicambs March 27 2013, 08:51:48 UTC

More, yay! :-)

gaiafaye March 27 2013, 23:14:41 UTC

:) Glad there are still people around to enjoy it. Thanks.

seraphtrevs March 28 2013, 06:03:57 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Won't have time to read this until the weekend, but omg, an UPDATE! :D

gaiafaye March 28 2013, 23:17:13 UTC

:D I look forward to any thoughts, if you find the time.

againandagain22 March 28 2013, 20:08:56 UTC

An update :) Every chapter feels a little more tense, and I suspect every person who interacts with Mohinder of secretly being Sylar!

gaiafaye March 28 2013, 23:17:53 UTC

Haha, Sylar's greatest power: instilling paranoia.

Thank you for reading!

seraphtrevs April 8 2013, 05:41:52 UTC

Okay, I'm back! Sorry it took so long. There were surprise relatives, and my sister's getting married in a week so there's been that, too.

- Good to see Claire finding a purpose for herself! Ha, I liked Mohinder being all "Are you pimping out your daughter?" and Noah's like "NO IT'S NOT LIKE THAT. >:("

- And verrrry interesting that the Petrellis are being phased out. Angela can't be happy about that.

- D'awww, Mohinder house-hunting! I like in the midst of all the craziness, everyone still has to carry about the normal business of living. Ahahahahaha, and I loved Claire's negotiating tactics. XD I also liked:
"Sure," Mohinder said with a shrug. His style of "decorating" was more along the lines of "letting clutter collect." Hee!

- Darla passed the phone along with the notes to Matt, and as he took them his sleeve slid past his wrist, exposing a swelled, blotchy yellow blister.

"What happened there?" Mohinder asked, leaning forward <---That's an excellent question, Mohinder - I'm curious too.

- "They offer a ( ... )

gaiafaye April 9 2013, 02:08:25 UTC

Claire making a place in the Agency *somehow* manages to be more interesting than Claire playing Guitar Hero. ;) I think her participation helps Bennet see the downside of a leadership that thinks brainwashing a crazy man into a puppet is a good idea. Not that he's not regretting the hell out of it already ( ... )