Heroes fic: How You Sleep (6/12?)

[gaiafaye]

Title: How You Sleep - Chapter 6: Pulling It Together (6/12?)
Series: Heroes
Pairing: Mylar
Rating: R
Warnings: Mpreg! BS science! Fairly dark! Consent issues!
Summary: After being doused with the complete formula, Mohinder copes with a lingering side effect as he and everyone around him try to rebuild their lives and their trust.

Prologue | 1 | 2

Comments

[gaiafaye]

You'll probably really like the scene with Mohinder and Nathan in the 8th chapter! The intensity goes into new territory.

I'm bringing all kinds of characters back! ... And evidently they're all female. That does not say much for the actual show. :|

Thank you for reading.

[starrdust411]

Once again, right when I'm considering going to bed, I find an update. Your mind games are cruel indeed.

Also, I had a strangely difficult time viewing this post. I had to refresh the page five or six times before LJ showed me something other than a white screen. Weird O_o

Ah, so many answers, so many things finally resolved, yet still so many questions!

I'm so glad that Mohinder finally spilled the beans to his mom and Molly and I feel like the conversation flowed very naturally, especially with all the switching between Mrs. Suresh and Molly. Also, I love the fact that once Mohinder mentions his abilities formula his mother instantly knew he injected himself. LOL. Apparently injecting untested serum into yourself is a very Suresh thing to do

[gaiafaye]

I am tortured by my night-owl-ness, therefore I must inflict my pain upon others! Also I was having the white page problem this morning, but it appears to be fine now.

As his mother, Mohinder's mom has to know how impulsive he can be! Plus it was pretty obviously a there's-something-I-really-don't-want-to-tell-you conversation.

As for future dark stuff... yes... I have this all planned out... completely... >_>

Peter comes back in the next chapter! He is supposed to have a job, after all. Plus then Matt and Mohinder get old-roommates bonding time though I didn't really show it without listening to Peter go on about the best nursery schools in the area.

(Thank you for yet another LJ gift, by the way!)

[seraphtrevs]

Oh hey, an update! :D I'm so pleased I checked lj before bed.

- I love Dr. Sokolowski! You have a fantastic talent for creating OCs that are really entertaining in their own right. Her Picasso line was fabulous. (And man, poor Mohinder.) You've also done a good job with the BS science, which is always tough.

- The phone call with his mom and Molly was perfect. His mom's reaction was spot-on, with the screaming at him for vanishing and then having to hand the phone off to Molly, and then getting angry at him for telling Molly (only not really)...just really well done. And I was lol'ing so hard at all of Molly's lines. The seahorse bit was great

[gaiafaye]

I realized in this chapter that I may have created too many OCs, considering we haven't really gotten back to Darla. ;x But I'm glad they're engaging anyway-- and that my "science" at least sounds like it makes sense!

I'm glad the seahorse bit made you laugh, as I thought it was pretty amusing myself. And leave it to Molly to ask all the important questions. ;) AND I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED THE ENDING TO THE CONVERSATION because I had such trouble figuring out how to end it, until I realized, well, what would a mom say? That she loved him, duh.

I know I've said this before, but writing Nathan's deterioration is very entertaining. He doesn't know why he needs Mohinder to stay here, but by God it will happen wow he has a headache. The show really did make a mistake doing the two Sylars instead of just sticking with an internal Nathan/Sylar battle. But you can never have too much Sylar, AMIRITE

[alicambs]

Fascinating, and Tracy... I just wasn't expecting that.

[gaiafaye]

Glad that I'm keeping you on your toes! lol

[serafina20]

I just read all the parts of this, and it's really good. The conversation between "Nathan" and Mohinder was very well done. Can't wait for more!

[gaiafaye]

:) Thank you for reading! There is more "Nathan" and Mohinder creepiness to come, of course.