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FIC Just One Look (1/1) FRT

Apr 16, 2011 08:19

Title: Just One Look
Author: Taylorgibbs
Pairing: Gibbs/Abby (pre relationship)
Rating: FRT
Spoilers: None
Summary: With just one look, Gibbs is attracted.
Feedback: Any way you want to send it :)
Author Note: Thanks to wintermute and onlyonechoice for the beta.
Written for Dannica Webb, who wanted angst, h/c and/or pre-show backstory

( Just One Look )

fic: 10/11

Comments 9

driftingatdusk April 16 2011, 14:26:17 UTC

*giggles* We are on the same wavelength!!

Really loved this - from Gibbs' first reaction to her and his instant attraction/intrigue and Abby's response to it to the action in the coffee shop. Hell of a first meeting - and very memorable.

Love the thought of Gibbs being responsible for her starting at NCIS, too, by rearranging the interview. And I love that their first Abby!hug/Gibbs!kiss exchange happened on their first day working together, too! *squees*

taylorgibbs April 18 2011, 11:44:48 UTC

Thanks so much!!! :)

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taylorgibbs April 18 2011, 11:45:58 UTC

Thanks so much!! It was amazing how Jo's story and mine echoed :) It worked so well!!

citymusings April 16 2011, 19:09:26 UTC

What a fabulous start to their relationship! It fits them so well. Great job!

taylorgibbs April 18 2011, 11:46:56 UTC

Thanks so much :)

replicantangel April 18 2011, 05:06:26 UTC

Hehe. I loved how he was trying to give her tips on how to handle Morrow before he got interrupted. The ending was awesome - might as well let Morrow in on her penchant for hugging right away, especially when it's Gibbs. :D

taylorgibbs April 18 2011, 11:47:58 UTC

Thanks so much! The hug was an important moment :)

dannicawebb April 28 2011, 04:23:06 UTC

omg i love this so much! thank you!

i especially love "That was intense and you went all superhero and I don’t even know your name" and '"He saved me! Hi, Gibbs! Can you believe it? They hired me!” She came around his desk and gave him an impulsive hug. “And its all thanks to you! We’re going to be great friends.”' :D overly excited talkative abby is my fave! and the part where he starts giving her directions on how to deal with morrow...hehehe!

this was really just gorgeous :) thank you so much for writing it for me!

taylorgibbs April 29 2011, 16:58:13 UTC

I'm so so glad you liked it!!! :) Thanks for the wonderful prompt!