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gaedhal

"Coup de Foudre" 121

Jan 28, 2016 02:48

What you've been waiting for…

Enjoy!

By Gaedhal

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coup de foudre, michael, fanfiction, ted, jimmy, justin, qaf

Comments 24

carol1943 January 28 2016, 09:33:39 UTC

GO JUSTIN!!!

gaedhal January 31 2016, 03:53:09 UTC

He's going for it.

wren_kt7oz January 28 2016, 09:49:48 UTC

Wow! I loved this. It's time someone gave it to Jimmy.

And gave Carmel a bit of a slap as well.

But even while Justin is stepping up and kicking ass, he still seems vulnerable, a little fragile. Real.

Nicely done, Gael.

gaedhal January 31 2016, 03:53:42 UTC

Carmel has been a bit passive-aggressive in all this.

bksbracelet January 28 2016, 11:23:04 UTC

Yay i am fist punching the air i loved loved that chapter! Woohoo Justi i full flight js a thi g of beauty 😊

gaedhal January 31 2016, 03:54:05 UTC

And a joy forever!

colleen2328 January 28 2016, 15:50:19 UTC

Excellent chapter! Authentic dialogue, character-driven action. Glad to have you back.

chadmom January 28 2016, 20:33:56 UTC

Yes!!!! GO JUSTIN!!!!

And finally Carmel agrees. I'm glad Justin told her off.

GREAT chapter, Gael!

Now for Brian and Justin together...

gaedhal January 31 2016, 03:55:36 UTC

Yup.