"Coup de Foudre" 73

Aug 25, 2014 00:51

Hang on.

I mean it.

By Gaedhal


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coup de foudre, fanfiction, brian/justin, qaf, gus

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kellankyle August 25 2014, 16:10:10 UTC
I love all of your picture choices. I'll be starting your series soon! :)

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chadmom August 25 2014, 17:09:40 UTC
You said to hang on. And boy, were you right!

You'll be posting the next chapter, soon, right? Right? Please?

Great chapter, Gael.

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chadmom August 25 2014, 18:03:31 UTC
Poor Justin. He was trying so hard and really seemed sincere.

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chadmom August 25 2014, 21:14:15 UTC
I think the person that said people in the U.S. spoil their children too much is right. One might understand why Gus might want to run off with Lindsay and Mavis. But it was a foolhardy stunt that he was not given any real punishment for. Instead he was rewarded for it by not having to go back to Canada. From this Gus has learned that running off gets you what you want, so of course he'll do it again.

milly

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anonymous August 25 2014, 17:22:26 UTC
Oh! Wow!

At least he's wearing the helmet--thank you Justin! Waiting with bated breath for next chapter. (made note of the "bated" discussion from previous chapter's comments)

Loved the run up to the accident, the drama queen and princess moments--and Gus trying to escape driving a stick shift. Not to crazy about the accident, but I can see that it would definitely be a wake-up call for one stubborn young man. Hoping Brian isn't badly injured here.
Thank you,
Lemon

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pclu2004 August 25 2014, 21:28:53 UTC
Excuse me!!! You did not just leave us hanging like this did you???

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anonymous August 26 2014, 04:09:03 UTC
Why are Michael and Deb the only ones called out for talking to Gus about Justin? And the stuff that they told Gus was true, not bullshit. Gus simply hasn't heard enough about the good qualities of Justin.

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