"Coup de Foudre" 1

Apr 03, 2013 02:26

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coup de foudre, fanfiction, end of the evil stream, justin, qaf, creekside canyon

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kmboatright April 3 2013, 06:53:42 UTC
Whoa. Wait, so is this going to be a Brian and Justin story?
The stupid twat is working at Kinnetik? After Brian went away to LA and never came back? WHERE IS THIS GOING I'M SO CONFUSED. I love it already. It's hilarious that Justin found himself a twink twelve years his junior... but one who is actually a know-nothing twink, apparently.
This seems like such an aimless Justin, the Justin of the evil stream who is so different from the Justin of QT who knows what he wants and never gives up on it. A Justin who could stop painting, a Justin who could let Brian go without a fight, not the Justin I love (and, ok, sometimes hate) of QT.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 18:58:04 UTC
It will be a B&J story.

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kmboatright April 3 2013, 22:12:03 UTC
Oh thank fuck. I thought, if it was a continuation of Creekside Canyon, that it was going to be a Brian and Ron story and I was dreading having to see Brian be happy with Ron.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 23:02:22 UTC
Well...

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camelhaircoat April 3 2013, 12:47:44 UTC
The boys are back!

Interesting. Justin seems to have turned into Brian.

Glad you've decided to continue writing here.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 18:58:25 UTC
He's 33.

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camelhaircoat April 3 2013, 22:14:40 UTC
yes, even with my limited mathematical prowess I was able to figure that much out.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 23:03:27 UTC
I mean, he's years older than Brian was when they
met. He's not "Sunshine" anymore.

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lexa4227 April 3 2013, 13:32:26 UTC
Wow! Powerful chapter. I hope you write more of this.

I am wonder if Brian and Justin meet up again?

Looking forward for more.

Lynn

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 19:02:46 UTC
If?

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dean1955 April 3 2013, 16:46:11 UTC

I see it.

I read it.

I read it again....but I still do not believe it.

A NEW story. Thank you!

I say that now, but I have a feeling the angst is going to kill me. If the first chapter is any indication, Justin is in a very bad and conflicted place right now.

The other flash was reading Ron Rosenblum's name again. It will be weird to have him back among the living. He has existed in the shadows for so long, it will be weird to see him take centerstage again. It will also be interesting to see what path Brian's life followed.

I know many of us always root for a happy ending, code for Brian and Justin riding off into the sunset, but with this story, all bets are off.

"So why am I doing this?

You'll find out soon.

Very soon."

When I saw this comment, little did I know the impact. I thrilled that you found the motivation and spark to give us another glimpse into this bizarro universe. I know in your trusted hand that there will many different ups and downs, and possibly a few surprises along the way.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 19:05:04 UTC
You might want to go back and look at

"The End of 'The Evil Stream'" -

First chapter: http://gaedhal.livejournal.com/168780.html

and "253 Creekside Canyon" -

First chapter of Part I: http://gaedhal.livejournal.com/177474.html

and Part II: http://gaedhal.livejournal.com/236305.html (I've given this
closure).

For the entire backstory. In Current D:

http://fortruthis.net/gaedhal

The complete pdfs are also available in the Files section of my Yahoo Group:

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/queer_theories_by_gaedhal/files/

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colleen2328 April 3 2013, 17:26:57 UTC
Wow!

Glad to see your muse wasn't gone for long. Just needed a spring break, it seems. I love this already! What a strong start. Can't wait for more.

Robbie's hot and he looks very familiar, but I can't place him.

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gaedhal April 3 2013, 19:17:42 UTC
We'll see how this goes.

Robbie is Freddie Smith, currently playing half of a
gay couple on "Days of Our Lives." He also played
the boyfriend of Teddy on "902190" a couple of
seasons ago. He's actually 25, but, as is usual,
he's playing younger. I don't know if he's gay, but
been involved in a number of gay causes in the
past. I thought he and Randy made a good match!


... )

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colleen2328 April 3 2013, 21:27:45 UTC
Nice! Good for him. He and Randy do make a good pair. Love the Lab; hope you'll put him in the story, too. Then we'll see how animal-friendly Brian's become!

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